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You might work at an English Center. Write a letter to you student to give him information about the new English course. In your letter: -Give information about time and place to study -Give advice about what he should bring in the first day

You might work at an English Center. Write a letter to you student to give him information about the new English course. In your letter: -Give information about time and place to study -Give advice about what he should bring in the first day qa2Nd
Hi Jackson, I am an English Center’s staff where you have signed up to study. I am writing this letter to provide you with information about your new English course. Firstly, I would like to inform you that your class will begin on the 15th of October. This course is expected to last two hours, from 6 p. m to 8 p. m on every Monday, Wednesday, and Friday. And I would also like to let you know that you will study in room B6 at 25A Pastuer Street, District 1, Ho Chi Minh City. Finally, It might also be useful for you to know that you should bring all of the learning tools and textbooks that the center provided you with when you came to register for this course on the first day of school. Please do not hesitate to contact me if you have any further questions. Best of luck in your studies. Your regards.
Hi Jackson,

I am an English Center’s staff where you have signed up to study. I am writing this letter to provide you with information about your new English course.

Firstly
, I would like to inform you that your
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
class
will
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
begin
on the 15th of October. This course is
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
expected
to last two hours, from 6 p. m to 8 p. m on every Monday, Wednesday, and Friday. And I would
also
like to
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
let
you know that you will study in room B6 at 25A
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Pastuer
Street, District 1, Ho Chi Minh City.

Finally
, It might
also
be useful for you to know that you should bring
Consider using "all the".
all of the
learning tools and textbooks that the center provided you with when you came to register for this course on the
first
day of school.

This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
Please
do not hesitate to contact me if you have any
further
questions. Best of luck in your studies.

Your regards.
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IELTS letter You might work at an English Center. Write a letter to you student to give him information about the new English course. In your letter: -Give information about time and place to study -Give advice about what he should bring in the first day

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  American English
6 paragraphs
157 words
6.0
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Task Achievement: 5.5
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