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Your car insurance company has told you that they are going to increase the amount you have to pay in insurance for your car each month. You are not happy about this. Write a letter to your insurance company. In your letter explain Why you are writing to them Why you think the insurance should not be increased What you want them to do

Your car insurance company has told you that they are going to increase the amount you have to pay in insurance for your car each month. You are not happy about this. Write a letter to your insurance company. In your letter explain Why you are writing to them Why you think the insurance should not be increased What you want them to do q3oa
Dear sir, I am writing this letter to express my dissatisfaction after receiving a message from general max life insurance pertaining to increase in monthly premium of my car insurance. It is a completely absurd thing to hike an insurance amount and regards to that I have very ungrateful feeling towards your firm. In the last seven years I am a loyal costumer consequently I suggest your establishment need to reconsider my car insurance amount. Reasons behind my proposal is covid 19 pandemic by which majority of population has been badly affected financially including me and, in such situation, I cannot afford another burden on my monthly expense. A further reason since I had purchased a policy from your organization I had never claimed insurance and also paid the all the premium before the due date. Owing to this, I request you to look after my above explanations and be static towards my premium amount as It was earlier. Yours faithfully, Jaiwick soni
Dear sir,

I am writing this letter to express my dissatisfaction after receiving a message from general max life
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insurance
pertaining to increase in monthly premium of my car insurance.

It is a completely absurd thing to hike an
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
insurance
amount and regards to that I have
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
very
ungrateful feeling towards your firm. In the last seven years I am a loyal costumer
consequently
I suggest your establishment need to reconsider my car
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
insurance
amount.

Reasons behind my proposal is
Did you mean "COVID-19" or the alternative spelling "Covid-19" (= coronavirus)?
covid 19
pandemic by which majority of population has been
badly
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
affected
financially
including me and, in such situation, I cannot afford another burden on my monthly expense. A
further
reason since I had
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
purchased
a policy from your organization I had never claimed
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
insurance
and
also
paid the all the premium
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
before
the due date.

Owing to this, I request you to look after my above explanations and be static towards my premium amount as It was earlier.

Yours
faithfully
,

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Jaiwick
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soni
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IELTS letter Your car insurance company has told you that they are going to increase the amount you have to pay in insurance for your car each month. You are not happy about this. Write a letter to your insurance company. In your letter explain Why you are writing to them Why you think the insurance should not be increased What you want them to do

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