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You should spend about 20 minutes on this task. A friend you met last year has invited you to visit him/her in his/her country. You have never been there before and need some information before you leave. Write a letter to your friend. In your letter: request advise about a gift for his/her family ask about activities and clothing in his/her country find out about the food You do NOT need to write any address. You should write at least 150 words.

A friend you met last year has invited you to visit him/her in his/her country. You have never been there before and need some information before you leave. Write a letter to your friend. In your letter: request advise about a gift for his/her family ask about activities and clothing in his/her country find out about the food You do NOT need to write any address. 0X1q
Dear Mohit, I recieved your invitation thank you for inviting me to be in your country fiji. I am really excited to be there can not wait to see you again. The time we spent together in auckland last year those moments were memorable for me with you. Friend as you know that i never been in fiji before and this is first time am gonna visit to your house. I want you to advise me what type of gifts i should buy for your family members will be great if you help me in that. Also i want to know about what are special activities in you country and famous tourist destination. Also inform me about what type of clothes i can bring with myself according to your country whether. As you know that i love to taste street food. I wanna know that from you from where we can enjoy delicious food. can't wait to meet you. See you soon take care. warm wishes Nirmal
Dear
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Mohit
,

I
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recieved
your invitation thank you for inviting me to be in your country
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fiji
. I am
really
excited to be there can not wait to
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
see
you again. The time we spent together in
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auckland
last year those moments were memorable for me with you.

Friend as you
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
know
that
Is this the personal pronoun "I"? It is spelled uppercase.
i
never been in
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fiji
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
before
and this is
first
time am
The word 'gonna' is informal. Consider an alternative.
gonna
visit to your
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
house
. I want you to advise me what type of gifts
Did you mean "I"?
i
should
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
buy
for your family members will be great if you
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
help
me in that.

Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Also
Is this the personal pronoun "I"? It is spelled uppercase.
i
want to
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
know
about what are special activities in you country and
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
famous
tourist destination.
Also
inform me about what type of clothes
Did you mean "I"?
i
can bring with myself according to your country whether.

“As” at the beginning of a sentence usually requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
As
you
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
know
that
Is this the personal pronoun "I"? It is spelled uppercase.
i
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
love
to taste street food. I
The word 'wanna' is informal. Consider an alternative.
wanna
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
know
that from you from where we can enjoy delicious food.

This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
can
't wait to
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
meet
you.
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
See
you
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
soon
take care.

This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
warm
wishes

Possible spelling mistake found.
Nirmal

IELTS letter A friend you met last year has invited you to visit him/her in his/her country. You have never been there before and need some information before you leave. Write a letter to your friend. In your letter: request advise about a gift for his/her family ask about activities and clothing in his/her country find out about the food You do NOT need to write any address.

Letter
  American English
7 paragraphs
166 words
6.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 6.5
  • Structure your answers in logical paragraphs
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    One main idea per paragraph
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    Include an introduction and conclusion
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    Support main points with an explanation and then an example
  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
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    Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 5.5
  • Try to vary your vocabulary using accurate synonyms
  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.0
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 5.0
  • Answer all parts of the question
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    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
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    Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
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  • You should spend about 20 minutes on this task. A friend you met last year has invited you to visit him/her in his/her country. You have never been there before and need some information before you leave. Write a letter to your friend. In your letter: request advise about a gift for his/her family ask about activities and clothing in his/her country find out about the food You do NOT need to write any address. You should write at least 150 words.