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Your bank has told you that they are going to increase the owerdraft charges on your current account each month.You aren’t happy about this.In you letter:why you are writing to them;Why you think the charges should not have been increased;what you want them to do

Your bank has told you that they are going to increase the owerdraft charges on your current account each month. You aren’t happy about this. In you letter: why you are writing to them; Why you think the charges should not have been increased; what you want them to do O6mxd
Dear Sir or Madam I am writing this letter to complain about you are going to increase the owerdraft charges on my current account each month. What I don't like about it is that all the money goes to my account without opening an additional card for me. If you increase the overdraft payments, my loans can grow automatically. And I don't want extra debt at all. As I said, the higher the fees, the higher the loan amount. It is also known that the card itself can be used to write off debts, which causes a lot of problems. I ask you not to increase the overdraft payments in my bank account every month. that is, I hope there will be no change in my bank account I look forward to your reply, Yours faithfully' Kamola Hamroqulova.
Dear Sir or Madam

I am writing this letter to complain about you are going to increase the
owerdraft
charges on my
current
account each month.

What I don't like about it is that all the money goes to my account without opening an additional card for me. If you increase the overdraft payments, my loans can grow
automatically
. And I don't want extra debt at all.

As I said, the higher the fees, the higher the loan amount. It is
also
known that the card itself can be
used
to write off debts, which causes
a lot of
problems.

I ask you not to increase the overdraft payments in my bank account every month.
that
is, I hope there will be no
change
in my bank
account


I look forward to your reply,

Yours
faithfully
'

Kamola
Hamroqulova
.
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IELTS letter Your bank has told you that they are going to increase the owerdraft charges on your current account each month. You aren’t happy about this. In you letter: why you are writing to them; Why you think the charges should not have been increased; what you want them to do

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  American English
7 paragraphs
138 words
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less than 250 words in Task 2
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5.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 6.5
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    Include an introduction and conclusion
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    Support main points with an explanation and then an example
  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
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    Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 5.5
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  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.5
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 5.0
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    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
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