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Your neighbor keeps his/her animal in the garden. Write to him/her about it and the inconvenience it causes you and your family.

Your neighbor keeps his/her animal in the garden. Write to him/her about it and the inconvenience it causes you and your family. DYDdA
Dear Ms. Santos, I am writing to inform you that your lovely dog tear down my precious garden. It is troublesome to our side. Here's what happened, One day morning, I planned to pour some water in my plants, but look what I saw your pet demolish all of it. My beautiful flowers fell down on the ground. I search in the backyard to check how she entered, and I found there is a small hole between the barrier. The following day same scenarios happened. It is a very sad moment because we exert effort to make our plants bloom and become more attractive. with this, I suggest if you can tie your favorite animal or fix the open hole connecting our fence. Maybe you can also buy some toys for your pet to play. And if this matter arises again, I will directly inform the members of our association here in our village to take some actions. Thank you so much for your time to read this letter. And I am looking forward to hearing from you. Yours sincerely, April Quinagoran
Dear Ms. Santos,

I am writing to inform you that your lovely dog tear down my precious garden. It is troublesome to our side.

Here's what happened, One day morning, I planned to pour
some
water in my plants,
but
look what I
saw
your pet demolish all of it. My
beautiful
flowers fell down on the ground. I search in the backyard to
check
how she entered, and I found there is a
small
hole between the barrier. The following day same scenarios happened. It is a
very
sad moment
because
we exert effort to
make
our plants bloom and become more attractive.

with
this, I suggest if you can tie your favorite animal or
fix
the open hole connecting our fence. Maybe you can
also
buy
some
toys for your pet to play. And if this matter arises again, I will
directly
inform the members of our association here in our village to take
some
actions.

Thank you
so
much for your time to read this letter. And I am looking forward to hearing from you.

Yours
sincerely
,

April
Quinagoran
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IELTS letter Your neighbor keeps his/her animal in the garden. Write to him/her about it and the inconvenience it causes you and your family.

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  American English
7 paragraphs
181 words
6.0
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Coherence and Cohesion: 6.5
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