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Letter about noise from a flat

Letter about noise from a flat 2KMxM
Dear Robert, I hope you have been keeping well and am glad that you have reached out regarding the noise from my flat. I have recently adopted a child and am still learning about being a single parent. I am still trying to find my way around caring for a child and therefore have not been able to understand all my child's needs and wants at appropriate moments. For example, my daughter last night but she kept on crying for an hour last night even though I I had fed and changed her a few minutes before. I tried everything I could think of but was not able to calm her down until she fell asleep on her own. I understand that this might be causing an immense amount of noise and I apologize for the disturbance caused due to the noise. I really hope that you have not been inconvenienced due to it. I found out that there are classes on parenting online and have decided to join one so that I am able to understand my daughter more clearly while also being able to be a better parent. This might take a few more days but hope that you will be able to bear with me until I improve so that you will not be disturbed by the noise quite as often. Kind Regards, Mary
Dear Robert,

I hope you have been keeping well and am glad that you have reached out regarding the
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
noise
from my flat.

I have recently adopted a child and am
still
learning about being a single parent.
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I
am
still
trying to find my way around caring for a child and
therefore
have not been
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able
to understand all my child's needs and wants at appropriate moments.
For example
, my daughter last night
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but
she
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kept
on crying for an hour last night
even though
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I I
had fed and
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changed
her a few minutes
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before
. I tried everything I could
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think
of
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but
was not
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able
to calm her down until she fell asleep on her
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own
.

I understand that this might be causing an immense amount of
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
noise
and I apologize for the disturbance caused due to the
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
noise
.
Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Consider rewording the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
I
really
hope that you have not
been inconvenienced
due to it.

Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Consider rewording the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
I
found out that there are classes on parenting online and have decided to
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
join
one
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so
that I am
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
able
to understand my daughter more
clearly
while
also
being
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
able
to be a better parent.

This might take a few more days
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
but
hope that you will be
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
able
to bear with me until I
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
improve
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so
that you will not
be disturbed
by the
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
noise
quite as
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often
.

Kind Regards,

Mary
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IELTS letter Letter about noise from a flat

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  American English
8 paragraphs
226 words
6.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 6.5
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Lexical Resource: 5.5
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Grammatical Range: 6.5
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Task Achievement: 5.0
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