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Letter on suitcase which lost in flight during my travel

Letter on suitcase which lost in flight during my travel raAPJ

Dear Sir/Mam, I am writing to inform you about my suitcase which I lost in your flight during my travel. Last Sunday, I took flight number 464 from Bangalore to Delhi at 10 o’clock in the night. I was carrying one laptop bag and one suitcase which I kept in the cabin under my seat only. Unexpectedly, the flight reached late in Delhi at around 1 o’clock in the night and I was very tired and heavy-eyed due to my hectic day schedule. Before leaving, I took my laptop bag though forgot to take my suit case. My suitcase is black in colour with brand name “VIP” printed on the left top corner. It is actually a trolley bag containing my important official documents, such as two blue and two green files along with one imported pen from “Parker”. In addition to that, there were few clothes as well. I request you to please find my suitcase as soon as possible and kindly inform me once found so that I could collect from you. I look forward to hearing from you soon. Yours faithfully, Rajesh Verma

Dear Sir/Mam,

I am writing to inform you about my You use this word too often, consider replacing it withbagsatchel
suitcase
 which I lost in your flight during my travel.

Last Sunday, I took flight number 464 from Bangalore to Delhi at 10 o’clock in the night. I was carrying one laptop bag and one You use this word too often, consider replacing it withbagsatchel
suitcase
 which I This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :retained
kept
 in the cabin under my seat This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :exclusively
only
. Unexpectedly
, the flight reached late in Delhi at around 1 o’clock in the Use a comma before 'and' if it connects two independent clauses (unless they are closely connected and short).night, and
night and
 I was This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:extremelyimmenselysupremelysuperb
very
 tired and heavy-eyed due to my hectic day schedule. This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:previouslyprior to
Before
 leaving, I took my laptop bag though forgot to take my suit case.

My You use this word too often, consider replacing it withbagsatchel
suitcase
 is A more concise phrase may lose no meaning and sound more powerful.black
black in colour
 with brand name “VIP” printed on the This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :departed
left
 top corner. It is actually a trolley bag containing my This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:vitalcriticalessential
important
 official documents, such as two blue and two green files along with one imported pen from “Parker”. In addition
 to that, there were few clothes as well
.

I request you to This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :satisfy
please
 find my You use this word too often, consider replacing it withbagsatchel
suitcase
 as This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:in the near future
soon
 as possible and kindly inform me once found This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:consequently
so
 that I could collect from you.

I look forward to hearing from you This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:in the near future
soon
.

Yours faithfully
,

Rajesh Possible spelling mistake found.VersaVelmaVernaErmaVera
Verma