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You have recently returned home from your trip abroad. However, you found that your suitcase was missing. Write a letter to the manager of the airport. In your letter: explain the situation; describe your suitcase and its contents; say what you’d like to be done about it.

You have recently returned home from your trip abroad. However, you found that your suitcase was missing. Write a letter to the manager of the airport. In your letter: explain the situation; describe your suitcase and its contents; say what you’d like to be done about it. XyXEA
Dear Sir or Madam, I have been abroad recently. Unfortunately when I came home I realized that my suitcase was missing. The thing that It was very precious to me I had been given as a gift on my birthday by my brother. My suitcase was made in China in 20020 and it was in a high quality leather one. The color of the my suitcase is in dark blue and the handle is reddish. It has two locks on the front side. There are some bad scratches on back side. It is designed for office work. There were two pens which are two expensive and three pencils. Apart from that there were two copy-books and a book that I usually read at work I mean at lunch. I also had a some amount of money actually I did not calculate. could you do some searching at the check out area and please let me know if you find. I am forward to hearing soon with best regards,
Dear Sir or Madam,

I have been abroad recently. Unfortunately when I came home I realized that my suitcase was missing. The thing that It was
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
very
precious to me I had been
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
given
as a gift on my birthday by my brother. My suitcase
was made
in China in 20020 and it was in a high quality leather one. The color of
A determiner cannot combine with a possessive pronoun. Did you mean simply "my suitcase" or "the suitcase"?
the my suitcase
is in dark blue and the handle is reddish.

It has two locks on the front side. There are
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some
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
bad
scratches on back side. It
is designed
for office work. There were two pens which are two expensive and three pencils. Apart from that there were two copy-books and a book that I
usually
read at work I mean at lunch. I
also
had a
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
some
amount of money actually I did not calculate.

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could
you do
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some
searching at the
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check
out area and
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please
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let
me know if you find. I am forward to hearing
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soon


with best regards,
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IELTS letter You have recently returned home from your trip abroad. However, you found that your suitcase was missing. Write a letter to the manager of the airport. In your letter: explain the situation; describe your suitcase and its contents; say what you’d like to be done about it.

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  American English
4 paragraphs
168 words
6.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 6.0
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Lexical Resource: 6.5
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  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.5
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  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 5.5
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    Present relevant ideas
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