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Your are moving to a new country to go to university and will need a part-time job. You have a friend who lives in that country. Write a letter to your friend. In your letter, Apologise for not staying in touch Explain why you’re moving to this country Ask your friend if he/she can help you find a job

Your are moving to a new country to go to university and will need a part-time job. You have a friend who lives in that country. Write a letter to your friend. In your letter, Apologise for not staying in touch Explain why you’re moving to this country Ask your friend if he/she can help you find a job Dear Mintu, I hope you are well. I’m writing this letter to inform you about my visiting to London and I need your help for searching job by you. For give me because I’m not contacting you because my mother is ill now. She is suffering from cancer which I email you to your previous email address. I’m studying in oxford university since I have got a scholarship in that school. I’m a newcomer in your country and don’t know any important location. I’ll stay at your house first for refreshing going threre. After one week I need a job because of continuing my educational expenses. I know, you have helped my sister to get job there. I also request you to help me get a job in that county All the best, janu

Your are moving to a new country to go to university and will need a part-time You use this word too often, consider replacing it withtaskappointmentofficebusinesscareerassignment
job
. You have a friend who This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :resides
lives
 in that country.

Write a letter to your friend. In your letter,

Possible spelling mistake. 'Apologise' is British English.Apologize
Apologise
 for not staying in touch

This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :interpret
Explain
 why you’re moving to this country

Ask your friend if he/she can This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :assistassistance
help
 you find a job

Dear Possible spelling mistake found.MintMintsMintyMint u
Mintu
,

I hope you are well. I’m writing this letter to inform you about my visiting to London and I need your This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :assistassistance
help
 for searching You use this word too often, consider replacing it withtaskappointmentofficebusinesscareerassignment
job
 by you.

For give me This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:due to the factin light of the fact thatowing to the fact that
because
 I’m not contacting you This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:due to the factin light of the fact thatowing to the fact that
because
 my mother is ill This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :nowadays
now
. She is suffering from cancer which I email you to your previous email address.

I’m studying in oxford university since I have This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :acquired
got
 a scholarship in that school. I’m a newcomer in your country and don’t know any This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:vitalcriticalessential
important
 location. Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Consider rewording the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
I
’ll stay at your This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :residence
house
first
 for refreshing going Possible spelling mistake found.theirtherethreethreatthread
threre
.

“After” at the beginning of a sentence usually requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
After
 one week I need a You use this word too often, consider replacing it withtaskappointmentofficebusinesscareerassignment
job
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:due to the factin light of the fact thatowing to the fact that
because
 of continuing my educational expenses. I know, you have This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :assisted
helped
 my sister to This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :acquire
get
You use this word too often, consider replacing it withtaskappointmentofficebusinesscareerassignment
job
 there. I also
 request you to This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :assistassistance
help
 me This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :acquire
get
 a You use this word too often, consider replacing it withtaskappointmentofficebusinesscareerassignment
job
 in that Please add a punctuation mark at the end of paragraphcounty.county!county?county:county,county;
county


All the best,

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janu