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Inrternational Food Party planned for tommorow night will be cancelled, because of cannot use the kichchens the local schol as we had arranged . Unfortunately, we will not be able to offer a refund on the tickets you have purchased , but we will try to organise anohter event in the future. Write formal letter. You should include your fellings about changes, and what you thing the club should do about this situation .

Inrternational Food Party planned for tommorow night will be cancelled, because of cannot use the kichchens the local schol as we had arranged. Unfortunately, we will not be able to offer a refund on the tickets you have purchased, but we will try to organise anohter event in the future. Write formal letter. You should include your fellings about changes, and what you thing the club should do about this situation. xPamw
Dear Sir/ Madam, My name is Linda Stell. I have been a member of our cooking club for three weeks. Iam writing this letter to express my deepest sadness felling the cancellation of our next International Food Party due to cannot use the kitchens at the local schools. You know I have purchased the ticket for this event. However, on the other hand I could not participate in any event due to lacking of money. Morover, you said that the this party`s schedule will not change. I think it is better for you to organise this event in the local restaurants in next week. I could participate. After a few weeks I am going to go to New York. My relatives live there and they have a wedding. I look forward to resiving your response at earliest convience if my recommendation and acceptable. Your faithfully, Linda Steel
Dear Sir/ Madam, My name is Linda
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Stell
. I have been a member of our cooking club for three weeks.
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Iam
writing this letter to express my deepest sadness felling the cancellation of our
next
International Food Party due to cannot
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use
the kitchens at the local schools. You know I have
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purchased
the ticket for this
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event
.
However
,
on the other hand
I could not participate in any
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event
due to lacking of money.
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Morover
, you said that
Maybe you need to remove the second determiner so that only "the" or "this" is left.
the this
The character between 'party' and 's' is an accent character, not a standard apostrophe character. Use "party’s" (curly apostrophe) or "party's" (straight apostrophe).
party`s
schedule will not
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change
. I
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think
it is better for you to
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organise
this
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event
in the local restaurants in
next
week. I could participate.
“After” at the beginning of a sentence usually requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
After
a few weeks I am going to go to New York. My relatives
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
live
there and they have a wedding. I look forward to
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resiving
your response at earliest
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convience
if my recommendation and acceptable.
Did you mean "Yours"? (complimentary close)
Your
faithfully
, Linda
Please add a punctuation mark at the end of paragraph
Steel
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IELTS letter Inrternational Food Party planned for tommorow night will be cancelled, because of cannot use the kichchens the local schol as we had arranged. Unfortunately, we will not be able to offer a refund on the tickets you have purchased, but we will try to organise anohter event in the future. Write formal letter. You should include your fellings about changes, and what you thing the club should do about this situation.

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