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Request for change in accommodation

Request for change in accommodation NWwMj
Dear Sir/Madam, I am writing to inform you that It has become difficult to stay in my current accommodation, which I am sharing with another student named Rahul. Although he is good at heart and kind in nature, he brings alcohol and smokes cigarettes, which is affecting my daily activities and increasing the vertigo problem that I have had since I was a child. I spoke to my roommate about my health situation and requested him several times to discontinue smoking and drinking in commonly used areas, which he agreed to follow. However, he violated the agreement not so long ago and brought his friends for late-night partying. This situation aggravated my vertigo further and increased my medical bills, I really tried to tolerate his behavior and kept this situation under wraps for months now, but it is quickly becoming a health hazard and I no longer can condone this situation. In this regard, I am requesting you to move me to a better accommodation where I can have some peace and study well. Thank you Ravi Teja Takkellapati.
Dear Sir/Madam,

I am writing to inform you that It has become difficult to stay in my
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
current
accommodation, which I am sharing with another student named Rahul. Although he is
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
good
at heart and kind in nature, he brings alcohol and smokes cigarettes, which is affecting my daily activities and increasing the vertigo problem that I have had since I was a child.

I spoke to my roommate about my health situation and requested him several times to discontinue smoking and drinking in
commonly
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
used
areas, which he
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
agreed
to follow.
However
, he violated the agreement not
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
so
long ago and brought his friends for late-night partying. This situation aggravated my vertigo
further
and increased my medical bills, I
really
tried to tolerate his behavior and
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
kept
this situation under wraps for months
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
now
,
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
but
it is
quickly
becoming a health hazard and I no longer can condone this situation.

In this regard, I am requesting you to
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
move
me to a better accommodation where I can have
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
some
peace and study well.

When a person is directly addressed, a comma should set off the name: "Thank you, Ravi"?
Thank you Ravi
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Teja
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Takkellapati
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IELTS letter Request for change in accommodation

Letter
  American English
5 paragraphs
179 words
6.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 6.0
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Grammatical Range: 6.0
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