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You have just arrived in an English speaking country to study a course. Before you left your English teacher invited you to a dinner.

You have just arrived in an English speaking country to study a course. Before you left your English teacher invited you to a dinner. 8J6Gm
Dear sir, I am always thankful to you and I am writing this letter to share my feeling when you invite me for a dinner at your home. With this invitation we had dark relationship between us. I have received ticket for go to the Brompton which is in Canada on 15th January. I will have pursue my post graduation course in It with this country. I found that there are many placement for the future job and I think this course fulfill my desire to live in the overseas country and communicate with multinational company. As a result I beleived that in this experiment change my and my family life too. I never forget your help when I have completed my Bachalore degree and at that time you had helped me a lot. The most important thing is how you learnt a formula which is never compaire to other. This all suggestion and advice would helped me in my future. Thank your for your all advice. Yours sincerely, Namrata Sonani.
Dear sir,

I am always thankful to
Use a comma before 'and' if it connects two independent clauses (unless they are closely connected and short).
you and
I am writing this letter to share my feeling when you invite me for a dinner at your home. With this invitation we had dark relationship between us.

I have received ticket for go to the
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Brompton
which is in Canada on 15th January. I will have
Use past participle here: "pursued".
pursue
my post graduation course in It with this country.
Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Consider rewording the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
I
found that there are
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many placement
for the future job and I
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
think
this course fulfill my desire to
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
live
in the overseas country and communicate with multinational
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
company
.
As a result
I
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beleived
that in this experiment
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
change
my and my family life too.

I never forget your
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
help
when I have completed my
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Bachalore
degree and at that time you had
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
helped
me a lot. The most
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
important
thing is how you
Possible spelling mistake. 'learnt' is British English.
learnt
a formula which is never
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compaire
to other.

This all suggestion and advice would
The verb 'would' requires the base form of the verb: "help"
helped
me in my future.

Thank your for your all advice.

Yours
sincerely
,
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Namrata
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Sonani
.
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IELTS letter You have just arrived in an English speaking country to study a course. Before you left your English teacher invited you to a dinner.

Letter
  American English
7 paragraphs
171 words
6.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 6.5
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Lexical Resource: 5.5
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Grammatical Range: 6.0
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Task Achievement: 5.0
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