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- Apologize for not being available - Explain why you are not available

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Dear John, how're you doing? Hope all is well with you and your family. I actually had a plan to visit my grandparents on the 15th of December for their anniversary. I have a small family get to gether there at Chennai. I am sorry, i wouldn't be able on the date we'd decided to meet and hangout together. Is it possible if you could make it up the next coming week after that? We could actually plan things out much better and also probably call in a few of our old schoolmates as well. I will be back in Bangalore on the 17th of December. I should be back home by 10am. Hoping my flight lands on time. Hoping to see you soon. Warm regards, Rohith Varghese
Dear John,

how're you doing? Hope all is well with you and your family.

I actually had a plan to visit my grandparents on the 15th of December for their anniversary. I have a
small
family
get
to
gether
there at Chennai.

I
am sorry,
i
wouldn't be able on the date we'd decided to
meet
and hangout together.

Is it possible if you could
make
it up the
next
coming week after that? We could actually plan things out much better and
also
probably
call in a few of our
old
schoolmates
as well
.

I will be back in Bangalore on the 17th of December. I should be back home by 10am. Hoping my flight lands on time. Hoping to
see
you
soon
.

Warm regards,

Rohith
Varghese
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IELTS letter - Apologize for not being available - Explain why you are not available

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  American English
8 paragraphs
127 words
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less than 250 words in Task 2
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5.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 6.5
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    Support main points with an explanation and then an example
  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
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    Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 5.5
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  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.5
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 5.0
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    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
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    Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
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