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You write to psychologist to ask advice how to upbring your son

You write to psychologist to ask advice how to upbring your son KW0wM
Dear Sir. I would be grateful if you could offer your advice about how to upbring my son in his period of teenage crisis. My name is Aziza. I am a mother of two kids. My close friend recommended you as a perfect, experienced psychologist. I have ever heard that you are brilliant at your job. Nowadays I through difficult times in my life, because of my son is coming up to adolescence period and it couses us tough situations. Be kind please, What can I do in this case? Is there any way to come out from this discomfort? Sometimes we cannot control him where he goes, with whom he chats. He became very rude with me. I do not expected that someone you like, someone close to you, suddenly stars acting like stranger or enemy. That kind of discomfort leads him to ignore me and the other members of family. He stopped obey me and my husband. We tried to attitude him politely several times, tried to understand his feelings, thoughts but we cannot manage being good parents. I was not mistaken choosing you. Thank you for taking time to read this letter. I would appreciate if you could give me your advice as soon as possible. My contact details can be found at the end of the letter. I hope to hear from you soonYours faithfullyAziza.
Dear Sir. I would be grateful if you could offer your advice about how to
upbring
my son in his period of teenage crisis. My name is
Aziza
. I am a mother of two kids. My close friend recommended you as a perfect, experienced psychologist. I have ever heard that you are brilliant at your job. Nowadays I through difficult times in my life,
because
of my son is coming up to adolescence period and it
couses
us tough situations. Be kind
please
, What can I do
in this case
? Is there any way to
come
out from this discomfort?
Sometimes
we cannot control him where he goes, with whom he chats. He became
very
rude with me. I do not
expected
that someone you like, someone close to you,
suddenly
stars acting like stranger or enemy. That kind of discomfort leads him to
ignore
me and the other members of family. He
stopped
obey me and my husband. We tried to attitude him
politely
several times, tried to understand his feelings, thoughts
but
we cannot manage being
good
parents. I was not mistaken choosing you. Thank you for taking time to read this letter. I would appreciate if you could give me your advice as
soon
as possible. My contact
details
can
be found
at the
end
of the letter. I hope to hear from you
soonYours
faithfullyAziza
.
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IELTS letter You write to psychologist to ask advice how to upbring your son

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  American English
1 paragraphs
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5.5
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