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suggest your friend websites who wants to know what is happening in the world. in your letter say what websites why you suggested it give other options

suggest your friend websites who wants to know what is happening in the world. in your letter say what websites why you suggested it give other options gDxKd
Dear Alley. I hope this letter finds you well. I got your letter yesterday; I am very delighted that you are increasing interest related to current affairs. I would be extremely glad to recommend some websites for it. I can understand that you have asked for my suggestions because of my vast knowledge about the internet. I would suggest that to get latest update about things happening in the world then use daily hunt and you can also check www. shartsupdate. com, both are reliable in terms of information. Once you would start reading these blogs, they would make personalized would data for you according to your search history, therefore, you will not find any unnecessary news on that page. Furthermore, I would like say that subscribe for online version of "The World Today" magazine which comes weekly it would help you to broaden your horizons about the earth. There are many other options available which will discuss when we will meet personally. Hоре this information is sufficient for now. Waiting to see you soon. Yours Sincerely, Rhea
Dear Alley.

I hope this letter finds you well. I
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got
your letter yesterday; I am
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very
delighted that you are increasing interest related to
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current
affairs.
Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Consider rewording the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
I
would be
extremely
glad to recommend
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some
websites for it.

Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Consider rewording the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
I
can understand that you have
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asked for
my suggestions
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because
of my vast knowledge about the internet.
Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Consider rewording the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
I
would suggest that to
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get
A determiner is probably missing here: "the latest".
latest
update about things happening in the world then
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
use
daily hunt and you can
also
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check
Possible spelling mistake found.
www
.
This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
shartsupdate
.
This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
com
, both are reliable in terms of information. Once you would
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
start
reading these blogs, they would
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
make
personalized would data for you according to your search history,
therefore
, you will not find any unnecessary news on that page.

Furthermore
, I would like say that subscribe for online version of
Use a smart opening quote here: "“".
"
The World
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
Today
Use a smart closing quote here: "”".
"
magazine which
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
comes
weekly it would
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
help
you to broaden your horizons about the earth. There are
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
many
other options available which will discuss when we will
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
meet
personally
.

Possible spelling mistake found.
Hоре
this information is sufficient for
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
now
. Waiting to
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
see
you
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
soon
.

Yours
Sincerely
,

Rhea
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IELTS letter suggest your friend websites who wants to know what is happening in the world. in your letter say what websites why you suggested it give other options

Letter
  American English
7 paragraphs
177 words
6.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 6.5
  • Structure your answers in logical paragraphs
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    One main idea per paragraph
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    Include an introduction and conclusion
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    Support main points with an explanation and then an example
  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
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    Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 6.0
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  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.0
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 5.0
  • Answer all parts of the question
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    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
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    Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
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