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Letter regarding friend's birthday celebration suggestion

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Dear Tom, I hope you are doing fine, and excited for your big 30’s birthday this month. First off, to make this day a remarkable and a different one I’d suggest you plan a party based on some incredible themes. If I were you, I would have given a shot at Marvel - Super hero theme. Since there are numerous characters in this theme, our people will be exhilarated to arrive in their own favorite character’s costume and it would be ecstatic to watch each other! Having set the theme, moving on to finding a suitable place for this wonderful occasion, a party hall near the beach will be an ideal place. Not only a big party hall would suffice, but an open space of at least 3000 sqft would be a mandatory requisite for planning this party on a granular level. Additionally, to make the party even more interesting, I suggest you organize a game, DJ and a magic show. While the magic show attracts children, the adults will be engaged in fun filling games and followed by some relaxing dance. Anyway, if you want to talk it through in person, just let me know. Always happy to hear from you. Best Regards, Abi

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Best Regards,

Abi