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Dear Sir/Madam I am writing to express my interest in the shopping center that you are planning to build in my home town. I have been living here for almost ten years, consequently it will have a huge impact on my life. I have heard the news from my neighbor who is the architect of your building. I certainly believe that he is an expert in his major, so obviously I expect the shopping center to be a beautiful one. Generally, there are a number of factors to be considered, one of the most essential one is the range of various stores in it, which raise the question of are they going to satisfy the needs of the local customers or not. Although, it is challenging copping with noise of construction, on the contrary I hope it is worth all the difficulties. As far as I am concerned it is going to help the neighborhood to improve our lifestyle. The only question remained is that are there going to be any sport facility? Due to the fact that was and is one of the most pressing problems around here. I would deeply appreciate if you could give more information about that. I am looking forward hearing from you. Sincerely, Ali Aslani

Dear Sir/Madam I am writing to express my interest in the shopping center that you are planning to build in my home town. I have been living here for almost ten years, consequently
 it will have a huge impact on my life. I have heard the news from my neighbor who is the architect of your building. Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Consider rewording the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
I
certainly
 believe that he is an expert in his major, This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:consequently
so
obviously
 I This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :anticipate
expect
 the shopping center to be a This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :gorgeousstunning
beautiful
 one. Generally
, there are a number of factors to be considered
, one of the most essential one is the range of various stores in it, which raise the question of are they going to satisfy the needs of the local customers or not. Although, it is challenging copping with noise of construction, on the contrary
 I hope it is worth all the difficulties. “As” at the beginning of a sentence usually requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
As
 far as I am concerned
 it is going to This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :assistassistance
help
 the neighborhood to This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :ameliorate
improve
 our lifestyle. The This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :exclusively
only
 question remained is that are there going to be any sport facility? Due to the fact that was and is one of the most pressing problems around here. I would deeply
 appreciate if you could give more information about that. I am looking forward hearing from you. Sincerely
, Ali Possible spelling mistake found.AslantAssani
Aslani