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Dear Sir/Madam I am writing to express my interest in the shopping center that you are planning to build in my home town. I have been living here for almost ten years, consequently it will have a huge impact on my life. I have heard the news from my neighbor who is the architect of your building. I certainly believe that he is an expert in his major, so obviously I expect the shopping center to be a beautiful one. Generally, there are a number of factors to be considered, one of the most essential one is the range of various stores in it, which raise the question of are they going to satisfy the needs of the local customers or not. Although, it is challenging copping with noise of construction, on the contrary I hope it is worth all the difficulties. As far as I am concerned it is going to help the neighborhood to improve our lifestyle. The only question remained is that are there going to be any sport facility? Due to the fact that was and is one of the most pressing problems around here. I would deeply appreciate if you could give more information about that. I am looking forward hearing from you. Sincerely, Ali Aslani
Dear Sir/Madam I am writing to express my interest in the shopping center that you are planning to build in my home town. I have been living here for almost ten years,
consequently
it will have a huge impact on my life. I have heard the news from my neighbor who is the architect of your building.
I
certainly
believe that he is an expert in his major,
so
obviously
I
expect
the shopping center to be a
beautiful
one.
Generally
, there are a number of factors to
be considered
, one of the most essential one is the range of various stores in it, which raise the question of are they going to satisfy the needs of the local customers or not. Although, it is challenging copping with noise of construction,
on the contrary
I hope it is worth all the difficulties.
As
far as I
am concerned
it is going to
help
the neighborhood to
improve
our lifestyle. The
only
question remained is that are there going to be any sport facility? Due to the fact that was and is one of the most pressing problems around here. I would
deeply
appreciate if you could give more information about that. I am looking forward hearing from you.
Sincerely
, Ali
Aslani
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IELTS letter Building a shopping center in our

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  American English
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210 words
6.0
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