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vacancy of property management

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Dear sir, I am writing to you to about the vecancy of property management. I rade in the newspaper last week please give me chance to elaborate my self. As your requirements I am a manager at multi national company since 3 years I have a numerous experience about who to handle property. Moreover, I want to find my job near by my accommodation hence I can save my travelling time. I read that advert thus I feel it will be ideal option for me. As I said prior, I have ampoul experience on that field I have been working in my company as building guide, thus I know how to handle apartment or building. Furthermore, I also go through all the paper work like property tax, water tax, and maintainance of complex. If you give me a chance I will prove my self better way. I manage hole things about the property I will assure you that you have never get any problem by my side. I look forward to hearing positive answer from your side. Yours faithfully, Jimmy Faldu
Dear sir,

I am writing to you to about the
vecancy
of
property
management. I
rade
in the newspaper last week
please
give me chance to elaborate my self.

As your requirements I am a manager at
multi national
company
since 3 years I have a numerous experience
about who to
handle
property
.
Moreover
, I want to find my job
near by
my accommodation
hence
I can save my travelling time. I read that advert
thus
I feel it will be ideal option for me. As I said prior, I have
ampoul
experience on that field I have been working in my
company
as building guide,
thus
I know how to handle apartment or building.
Furthermore
, I
also
go through all the paper work like
property
tax, water tax, and
maintainance
of complex.

If
you give me a chance I will prove my self better way. I manage hole things about the
property
I will assure you that you have never
get
any problem by my side.

I look forward to hearing
positive
answer from your side.

Yours
faithfully
, Jimmy
Faldu
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IELTS letter vacancy of property management

Letter
  American English
6 paragraphs
180 words
6.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 6.5
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Lexical Resource: 5.5
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Grammatical Range: 6.0
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Task Achievement: 5.0
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