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You forget an item of clothing At the hotel where you stayed recently write the letter to the hotel manager. When and what is the room? Describe the item? What would you like the manager to do about it?

You forget an item of clothing At the hotel where you stayed recently write the letter to the hotel manager. When and what is the room? Describe the item? What would you like the manager to do about it? NV89q
Dear sir, My name is Priyanka Chauhan. I stayed in your hotel from 22nd June to 26th June of this month in room number 420. I really in joyed your hospitality. The staff members are friendly and cooperative. The location of the hotel is very convenient and I have recommended your hotel to my friends and relatives. However, I am writing this letter to inform you that I have forgotten my clothing item which is a blue denim jeans in your hotel. The denim jeans has a red badge at the back pocket. This paint is very close to me because it is gifted to me by my husband. I came to know about my clothing item when I reached at my home and unpacked my suitcase. Now I could not come back to collect it because you are hotel is a too far from my house. I request you to please check for my clothing item, if you find it please send it to me at my residential address. I will be very thankful to you. I expect your cooperation in this matter. Yours sincerely, Priyanka Chauhan
Dear sir, My name is Priyanka Chauhan. I stayed in your
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hotel
from 22nd June to 26th June of this month in room number 420. I
really
in joyed your hospitality. The staff members are friendly and cooperative. The location of the
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hotel
is
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very
convenient and I have recommended your
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hotel
to my friends and relatives.

However
, I am writing this letter to inform you that I have forgotten my clothing item which is a blue denim jeans in your
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
hotel
. The denim jeans has a red badge at the back pocket. This paint is
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
very
close to me
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because
it
is gifted
to me by my husband. I came to know about my clothing item when I reached at my home and unpacked my suitcase.
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Now
I could not
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come
back to collect it
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because
you are
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hotel
is a too far from my
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house
.

I request you to
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please
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check
for my clothing item, if you find it
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please
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send
it to me at my residential address. I will be
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very
thankful to you.
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I
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expect
your cooperation in this matter. Yours
sincerely
, Priyanka
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Chauhan
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IELTS letter You forget an item of clothing At the hotel where you stayed recently write the letter to the hotel manager. When and what is the room? Describe the item? What would you like the manager to do about it?

Letter
  American English
3 paragraphs
187 words
6.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
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    Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 6.0
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  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.5
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  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 5.5
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    Present relevant ideas
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