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You write a letter where you friend went the univercity

You write a letter where you friend went the univercity DNmQ7
Dear Janes I hope you’re doing well and enjoying your new job. I’m writing to tell you about my upcoming visit to Georgia and I would like to ask your advice on a couple of things. My trip is for a client meeting in Georgia and I’ll be accompanied by two of my colleagues. The schedule seems to be hectic; however, I’ll get a bit of free time to see around. I know how much you loved your years at university in the city and I have been looking forward to visiting the city for quite a long time. I’ll be staying in hotel Tbilisi tower, which is located in the centre of the city. The accommodation is provided by the organizers. Can you please recommend some places to visit in the city during evenings? I remember you telling me about the mesmerizing local music and I would really like to listen to that. Moreover, if you could point me to some good restaurants to eat, that would be great too. Keep in touch Lindsy Keep in touch,
Dear
Janes


I hope you’re doing well and enjoying your new job. I’m writing to
tell
you about my upcoming visit to Georgia and I would like to ask your advice on a couple of things.

My trip is for a client meeting in Georgia and I’ll
be accompanied
by two of my colleagues. The schedule seems to be hectic;
however
, I’ll
get
a bit of free time to
see
around. I know how much you
loved
your years at university in the city and I have been looking forward to visiting the city for quite a long time.

I’ll be staying in hotel Tbilisi tower, which
is located
in the
centre
of the city. The accommodation
is provided
by the organizers. Can you
please
recommend
some
places to visit in the city during evenings? I remember you telling me about the mesmerizing local music and I would
really
like to listen to that.
Moreover
, if you could point me to
some
good
restaurants to eat, that would be great too.

Keep
in touch

Lindsy


Keep
in touch,
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IELTS letter You write a letter where you friend went the univercity

Letter
  American English
5 paragraphs
178 words
6.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 6.5
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    Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 5.5
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  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.5
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 5.0
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    Present relevant ideas
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