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Write a letter about your dissatisfaction with the service you received during a visit to travel agent

Write a letter about your dissatisfaction with the service you received during a visit to travel agent JLMX5
Dear Sir, I am writing to express my dissatisfaction with the service I received during a visit to your travel agent last week. Firstly, I had booked a lux room a week ago. You said those rooms have all the amenities. But the room seems to have a number of shortcomings. For example, the cleanliness of the room, the inconvenience of the toilet and the bathroom. Moreover, the negligence of staff disappointed me. Delays in breakfast and lunch are example of this. However, you said we have experienced staff. As a regular customer of yours, I feel disappointed with the service I have been treated and hope that steps will be taken to rectify the situation. I trust this matter will receive your immediate attention. Yours faithfully, John Wells
Dear Sir, I am writing to express my dissatisfaction with the service I received during a visit to your travel agent last week.
Firstly
, I had booked a lux
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room
a week ago. You said those
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rooms
have all the amenities.
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But
the
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room
seems to have a number of shortcomings.
For example
, the cleanliness of the
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
room
, the inconvenience of the toilet and the bathroom.
Moreover
, the negligence of staff disappointed me. Delays in breakfast and lunch are example of this.
However
, you said we have experienced staff. As a regular customer of
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yours
, I feel disappointed with the service I have
been treated
and hope that steps will
be taken
to rectify the situation. I trust this matter will receive your immediate attention.
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Yours
faithfully
, John
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Wells
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IELTS letter Write a letter about your dissatisfaction with the service you received during a visit to travel agent

Letter
  American English
1 paragraphs
128 words
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less than 250 words in Task 2
and less than 150 words in Task 1
5.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
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Lexical Resource: 6.5
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Grammatical Range: 6.5
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Task Achievement: 6.5
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