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V. You are the marketing manager at Truly Coffee. During Covid19 pandemic, fewer and fewer customers come to your shop. This leads to a decrease in sales. You have come up with some solutions. Write a letter to the owner about them

V. You are the marketing manager at Truly Coffee. During Covid19 pandemic, fewer and fewer customers come to your shop. This leads to a decrease in sales. You have come up with some solutions. Write a letter to the owner about them Gw7Gx
Dear sir During the Covid-19 pandemic, Truly Coffee has faced many challenges, so I am writing this letter to offer some solutions to the store. People often avoid going out for fear of spreading disease, especially in crowded places like restaurants and cafes. Moreover, people are cutting back on their current spending due to the decline in their income. This leads to a serious decrease in sales. Here are some solutions that I came up with. Firstly, follow the rules of disease prevention, and encourage customers to take away their food. Secondly, use the delivery food app to increase online sales. Third, users are interested in products that increase resistance, so healthy drinks should be added to the menu. I look forward to hearing from you soon. Sincerely the marketing manager's Truly Coffee
Dear sir

During the Covid-19 pandemic,
Truly
Coffee has faced
many
challenges,
so
I am writing this letter to offer
some
solutions to the store.

People
often
avoid going out for fear of spreading disease,
especially
in crowded places like restaurants and
cafes
.
Moreover
,
people
are cutting back on their
current
spending due to the decline in their income. This leads to a serious decrease in sales.

Here are
some
solutions that I came up with.
Firstly
, follow the
rules
of disease prevention, and encourage customers to take away their food.
Secondly
,
use
the delivery food app to increase online sales. Third, users
are interested
in products that increase resistance,
so
healthy drinks should be
added
to the menu.

I look forward to hearing from you
soon
.

Sincerely


the marketing manager's
Truly
Coffee
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IELTS letter V. You are the marketing manager at Truly Coffee. During Covid19 pandemic, fewer and fewer customers come to your shop. This leads to a decrease in sales. You have come up with some solutions. Write a letter to the owner about them

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  American English
5 paragraphs
132 words
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Coherence and Cohesion: 6.0
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Grammatical Range: 6.5
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Task Achievement: 6.5
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