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Hello. My name is Song. I'm fourteen years old. Today, I will tell you about education in Vietnam. In Vietnam, education is a very important issue and is placed on top. Vietnam pays great attention to educating the young generation, the future generation of the country. Therefore, Vietnam has been consolidating and building a really strong and quality education. Vietnamese education has 5 levels: preschool, primary school, middle school, high school and university. Over the past half century, Vietnamese education has achieved many great achievements in the cause of national construction and development. However, education in Vietnam still has many points to be improved. The first problem is that the content of teaching in Vietnam has not yet promoted the creativity and practical ability of students. Parents in Vietnam put a lot of emphasis on their children's achievements and grades, so many students feel pressured. The teaching staff and teachers still have many shortcomings, such as the distribution of teaching staff is still not reasonable in schools. Besides, there are many teaching staff who don't care about their students. Although it happens very rarely, I think there is still school violence in my country. The Vietnamese Ministry of Education has been trying to improve these issues, so that Vietnam's education is getting better and better. Well, that's all I want to talk about. Thanks for listening. Do you have any question?
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in Vietnam. In Vietnam,
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issue and
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. Vietnamese
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has 5 levels: preschool, primary
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, middle
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, high
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and university. Over the past half century, Vietnamese
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has achieved
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great achievements in the cause of national construction and development.
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in Vietnam
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points to be
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in Vietnam has not
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promoted the creativity and practical ability of students. Parents in Vietnam put
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emphasis on their children's achievements and grades,
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students feel pressured. The
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staff and teachers
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shortcomings, such as the distribution of
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who don't care about their students. Although it happens
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violence in my country. The Vietnamese Ministry of
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these issues,
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that Vietnam's
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is getting better and better. Well, that's all I want to talk about. Thanks for listening. Do you have any question?
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1 paragraphs
231 words
6.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
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Lexical Resource: 5.5
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Grammatical Range: 6.5
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Task Achievement: 6.5
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