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Letter to friend for vacation

Letter to friend for vacation XVB28
Dear Stephanie, I am writing this letter to let you know that, I am planning to spend a few days in the coming month with you. I am excited to spend some quality time with you and the kids. I was about to travel in the 2nd week of the next month to France. However, due to the COVID-19 situation all business travels have been postponed until further notice by my company. The COVID-19 situation is very unfortunate and has postponed all my business trips for the next 2 months. During my visit to your place, we can plan to visit your beach house where we can rest peacefully and play beach volleyball with the kids. I am sure the kids would love to play volleyball. We can also plan to take your yacht and the jet ski out for a quick ride to the nearby islands that we always used to go during our childhood in summer vacations. I plan to visit by myself as Ron is very busy with his business setup. I will let you know my travel itinerary soon once I have booked the train tickets. I am eager for this trip! See you soon, Mary Angelo
Dear Stephanie,

I am writing this letter to
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
let
you know that, I am planning to spend a few days in the coming month with you. I
am excited
to spend
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
some
quality time with you and the kids.

Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Consider rewording the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
I
was about to travel in the 2nd week of the
next
month to France.
However
, due to the COVID-19 situation all business travels have
been postponed
until
further
notice by my
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
company
. The COVID-19 situation is
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
very
unfortunate and has postponed all my business trips for the
next
2 months.

During my visit to your place, we can plan to visit your beach
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
house
where we can rest
peacefully
and play beach volleyball with the kids. I am sure the kids would
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
love
to play volleyball. We can
also
plan to take your yacht and the jet ski out for a quick ride to the nearby islands that we always
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
used
to go during our childhood in summer vacations. I plan to visit by myself as Ron is
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
very
busy with his business setup. I will
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
let
you know my travel itinerary
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
soon
once I have booked the train tickets.

Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Consider rewording the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
I
am eager for this trip!

This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
See
you
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
soon
,

Mary Angelo
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IELTS letter Letter to friend for vacation

Letter
  American English
7 paragraphs
200 words
6.5
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 6.5
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Lexical Resource: 6.5
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Grammatical Range: 6.5
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Task Achievement: 5.5
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