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Letter writing to a friend for missing his 50th birthday

Letter writing to a friend for missing his 50th birthday 06NOO
Dear Rahul, Happy belated birthday. I hope you are doing well and had a great 50th birthday party. I am really sorry, that I could not make up for it. It's been a long time since we meet and spend time. To be completely honest, I got swamped with my work schedule and there was a last-minute business trip for last few days so, I forgotten your day and did not occur to call you and cancel. The busy schedule is definitely not an excuse for your important day though, I would love to get a chance to meet you. For that reason, I've reserved a table for next Friday as we can spend a good time with each other. Let me treat you to a luxurious birthday dinner. I hope we can celebrate it to the fullest and have a great time next Friday. See you soon, Xxx
Dear Rahul,

Happy belated birthday. I hope you are doing well and had a great 50th birthday party.

I am
really
sorry, that I could not
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
make
up for it. It's been a long time since we
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
meet
and spend time.

To be completely honest, I
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
got
swamped with my work schedule and there was a last-minute business trip for last few days
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
so
, I forgotten your day and did not occur to call you and cancel.

The busy schedule is definitely not an excuse for your
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
important
day though, I would
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
love
to
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
get
a chance to
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
meet
you. For that reason, I've reserved a table for
next
Friday as we can spend a
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
good
time with each other.
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
Let
me treat you to a luxurious birthday dinner.

I hope we can celebrate it to the fullest and have a great time
next
Friday.

This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
See
you
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
soon
, Xxx
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IELTS letter Letter writing to a friend for missing his 50th birthday

Letter
  American English
7 paragraphs
148 words
This writing has been penalized,
text can't be
less than 250 words in Task 2
and less than 150 words in Task 1
5.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 6.5
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Lexical Resource: 6.5
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Grammatical Range: 6.0
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Task Achievement: 7.0
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