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You are going to learn English write a teacher about this

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I am writing to show my willingness to learn English skills. While searching for a good English teacher, I saw your advertisement in a social media. You are highly qualified and have a rich experience in some fields. Thereafter I asked about you from one of my friend. She really praised you and your teaching methodology and motivated me to join your classes. I have recently graduated a Bachelor Degree. I am going to continuing my studies for the CEFR certificate. Especially I must improve my writing, listening and speaking skills. I would like to ask about fees, date of joining and the timings of the classes. I would be highly obliged, if you could spare some time to teach me. Looking forward to hearing from you Yours faithfully Lilli Adam
I am writing to
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
show
my willingness to learn English
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
skills
. While searching for a
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
good
English teacher, I
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
saw
your advertisement in a social
Don't use indefinite articles with plural words. Did you mean "medium"?
media
. You are
highly
qualified and have a rich experience in
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some
fields.

Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Thereafter
I asked about you from one of my friend. She
really
praised you and your teaching methodology and motivated me to
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
join
your classes.

I have recently graduated a Bachelor Degree. I am
Did you mean "going to continue"?
going to continuing
my studies for the CEFR certificate.
Especially
I
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
must
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
improve
my writing, listening and speaking
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
skills
.

I would like to ask about fees, date of joining and the timings of the classes. I would be
highly
obliged, if you could spare
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
some
time to teach me.

Looking forward to hearing from you

Yours
faithfully


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Lilli
Adam
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IELTS letter You are going to learn English write a teacher about this

Letter
  American English
7 paragraphs
130 words
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less than 250 words in Task 2
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5.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 6.5
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    Include an introduction and conclusion
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    Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 6.0
  • Try to vary your vocabulary using accurate synonyms
  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.0
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 5.0
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    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
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    Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
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