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You would like to take a part time course at the university but don't have the money to do it write a Lee to an organisation that supports students financially and ask for help describe your qualifications and degree provided some detail of the course with help you in the future

You would like to take a part time course at the university but don't have the money to do it write a Lee to an organisation that supports students financially and ask for help describe your qualifications and degree provided some detail of the course with help you in the future Ywnym
Dear sir, I need to your help for keeping my study without you support I can't continue my study consequently I request to you through this letter Anyway I have completed my graduation in this year with 80 percent marks as well as I had done my schooling in arts stream with 88 percent as you can guess that I am good at study so I am interest as study consequently I want to do postgraduation as you know without this degree I can do any job in any field if I didn't complete this degree my future can totally finishTo do for this degrees I need too much fess on the contrary my financial conditions is not strong on to the fact that I completed my graduation degree to do part-time job now it is totally hard for me If I completely my whole degree then I can join in teaching field as well as I can join related to other field like past house, railway station, as on I know you will definitely help me for my fees your management can provide scholarship to see my scoring in my pervious study with of you help my further can also bright I look forward to waiting from your answer Your sincerely.
Dear sir, I need to your
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help
for keeping my
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study
without you support I can't continue my
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study
consequently
I request to you through this letter Anyway I have completed my graduation in this year with 80 percent marks
as well
as I had done my schooling in arts stream with 88 percent as you can guess that I am
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good
at
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study
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so
I am interest as
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study
consequently
I want to do
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postgraduation
as you know without this
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degree
I can do any job in any field if I didn't complete this
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degree
my future can
totally
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finishTo
do for
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this
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degrees
I need too much fess
on the contrary
my financial conditions is not strong on to the fact that I completed my graduation
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degree
to do part-time job
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now
it is
totally
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hard
for me If I completely my whole
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degree
then I can
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join
in teaching field
as well
as I can
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join
related to other field like past
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house
, railway station, as on I know you will definitely
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help
me for my fees your management can provide scholarship to
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see
my scoring in my
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pervious
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study
with of you
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help
my
further
can
also
bright I look forward to waiting from your answer

Your
sincerely
.

IELTS letter You would like to take a part time course at the university but don't have the money to do it write a Lee to an organisation that supports students financially and ask for help describe your qualifications and degree provided some detail of the course with help you in the future

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  American English
2 paragraphs
212 words
5.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 6.0
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Lexical Resource: 5.0
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Grammatical Range: 6.0
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Task Achievement: 5.0
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