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Some friends of mine are going backpacking next month around Vietnam. They would like to learn about Vietnamese culture and its history. Where should they begin the trip? What´s the easiest way to get around? Where should they stay as they are on a tight budget? Write an email responding to him. You should write at least 120 words. You are not allowed to include your name.

Some friends of mine are going backpacking next month around Vietnam. They would like to learn about Vietnamese culture and its history. Where should they begin the trip? What´s the easiest way to get around? Where should they stay as they are on a tight budget? Write an email responding to him. You are not allowed to include your name. gWXkL
Hi Alex, It is great to hear from you. How have you been? It is surprising to know that your friends are going to go backpacking around Vietnam, so I would like to give you some recommendations. Firstly, I think Hanoi – the capital of Vietnam will be the best choice to start their journey. Hanoi is famous for its antiquity and tradition through buildings, roads and citizens that has become a part of Vietnamese. From Hanoi, they can take a train to visit Hue which has marvelous citadel. I think they should go by train because it is the best time for them to enjoy the natural landscapes. After that, it is easy to catch a train to Da Nang; and don’t forget to visit Hoi Anh Ancient Town. Especially, I hope that your friends won’t miss Ha Long Bay which is know as an UNESCO World Heritage Sites and attract visitors by its fascinating scenery. Finally, when they reach to Ho Chi Minh City – in the south of Vietnam, I believe they should discover this interesting city by motorbikes. Different from Hanoi, Ho Chi Minh is hustle and bustle with friendly citizens regarding with delicious local cuisine. And about accommodation, the best option would be stay in homestay or dorms; they normally cost between 3 dollars to 5 dollars per night. Well, I am pleased to give you some suggestions and I wish your friends are going to have wonderful time here in Vietnam. You can ask me any questions, I hope to hear from you. Take care,
Hi Alex,

It is great to hear from you. How have you been? It is surprising to know that your friends are going to go backpacking around Vietnam,
so
I would like to give you
some
recommendations.

Firstly
, I
think
Hanoi
the capital of Vietnam will be the best choice to
start
their journey. Hanoi is
famous
for its antiquity and tradition through buildings, roads and citizens that has become a part of Vietnamese.

From Hanoi, they can take a train to visit Hue which has marvelous citadel. I
think
they should go by train
because
it is the best time for them to enjoy the natural landscapes. After that, it is easy to catch a train to
Da
Nang
; and don’t forget to visit
Hoi
Anh
Ancient Town.
Especially
, I hope that your friends won’t miss Ha Long Bay which is know as
an
UNESCO World Heritage Sites and attract visitors by its fascinating scenery.
Finally
, when they reach to Ho Chi Minh City
in the south of Vietnam, I believe they should discover this interesting city by motorbikes.
Different
from Hanoi, Ho Chi Minh is hustle and bustle with friendly citizens regarding with delicious local cuisine.

And about accommodation, the best option would be stay in homestay or dorms; they
normally
cost between 3 dollars to 5 dollars per night.

Well, I am
pleased
to give you
some
suggestions and I wish your friends are going to have wonderful time here in Vietnam. You can ask me any questions, I hope to hear from you.

Take care,
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IELTS letter Some friends of mine are going backpacking next month around Vietnam. They would like to learn about Vietnamese culture and its history. Where should they begin the trip? What´s the easiest way to get around? Where should they stay as they are on a tight budget? Write an email responding to him. You are not allowed to include your name.

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