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The company agrees to make the changes you suggest. Write an email from the employee to the HR team. Thank the HR team for their help Say what you like about your job now.

The company agrees to make the changes you suggest. Write an email from the employee to the HR team. Thank the HR team for their help Say what you like about your job now. JwpJ5
Greetings, Sir/Madame I'm writing to express my gratitude for agreeing to make the improvements that I recommend. I am currently quite satisfied at work as a result of these adjustments. My coworkers are kind and courteous, and they are always eager to assist me. Furthermore, each week's goals are extremely clear; I know what I need to do since I can create my own strategy to better my job. Right now, I'm happy with my boss since he constantly pays attention to his staff. I genuinely like working here. I hope that I will be able to offer my efforts to the company's long-term survival and development. Thank you for taking the time to listen to me. Best regards, Ngan.
Greetings, Sir/Madame

I'm writing to express my gratitude for agreeing to
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
make
the improvements that I recommend.

I am
currently
quite satisfied at work
as a result
of these adjustments. My coworkers are kind and courteous, and they are always eager to assist me.
Furthermore
, each week's goals are
extremely
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
clear
; I know what I need to do since I can create my
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
own
strategy to better my job. Right
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
now
, I'm happy with my boss since he
constantly
pays attention to his staff.

I
genuinely
like working here. I hope that I will be able to offer my efforts to the
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
company
's long-term survival and development.

Thank you for taking the time to listen to me.

Best regards,

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Ngan
.

IELTS letter The company agrees to make the changes you suggest. Write an email from the employee to the HR team. Thank the HR team for their help Say what you like about your job now.

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120 words
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