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you are going abroad on holiday

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Dear Amila, Hope you are doing well? I just thought of writing you to remind that i will 'll be leaving country by next Monday and hope you will visit here by Tuesday early morning. I will leave the gates unlocked and just push it bit hard to open because it always gets stuck. But Ii am keeping all doors and windows inside locked for safety. Once you enter the garden, you will see the garage on to your left. There is a small yellow colour box near the garage door and Ii will keep the key underneath that box. As soon as you visit here, please do not forget to feed my little cat Dolly because she might be already feeling hungry. There are some precooked meat and rice in the refrigerator so that you do not have to worry cooking anything for her which will be enough to feed for 2 weeks. Also please keep lights outside turned on whole night for safety. I filled the refridgerator with some of your favourite items that you would like to enjoy during your stay so please make yourself feel comfortable as your own home. I am expecting to come back home after 2 weeks and hope you'll be there upoun my return. I have already planned a small surprise for you so please try to be there when Ii arrive. Really appreciate your help during my visit away from home. Feel free to contact on my mobilePlease do not hesitate to contact me anytime if there is anything you need. I am reachable anytime on my mobile phone. Enjoy your stay! Kind Regards, Nuwan
Dear
Amila
,

Hope you are doing well? I
just
thought
of writing you to remind that
i
will 'll be leaving country by
next
Monday and hope you will visit here by Tuesday early morning. I will
leave
the gates unlocked and
just
push it bit
hard
to open
because
it always
gets
stuck.
But
Ii
am
keeping all doors and windows inside locked for safety. Once you enter the garden, you will
see
the garage on to your
left
. There is a
small
yellow
colour
box near the garage door and Ii will
keep
the key underneath that box.

As
soon
as you visit here,
please
do not forget to feed my
little
cat Dolly
because
she might be already feeling hungry. There are
some
precooked meat and rice in the refrigerator
so
that you do not
have to
worry cooking anything for her which will be
enough
to feed for 2 weeks.
Also
please
keep
lights outside turned on whole night for safety. I filled the
refridgerator
with
some
of your
favourite
items that you would like to enjoy during your stay
so
please
make
yourself feel comfortable as your
own
home.

I am expecting to
come
back home after 2 weeks and hope you'll be there
upoun
my return.
I
have already planned a
small
surprise for you
so
please
try to be there when Ii arrive.
Really
appreciate your
help
during my visit away from home. Feel free to contact on my
mobilePlease
do not hesitate to contact me anytime if there is anything you need. I am reachable anytime on my mobile phone. Enjoy your stay!

Kind Regards,

Nuwan
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6.0
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