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You took Trans World Airlines Flight 62 to New York on May 3, your suitcase was lost. You filled out a lost luggage form, but the suitcase was never found. The reference number on the form was NL283957. You want the company to pay $1,000 for the lost suitcase.

You took Trans World Airlines Flight 62 to New York on May 3, your suitcase was lost. You filled out a lost luggage form, but the suitcase was never found. The reference number on the form was NL283957. You want the company to pay $1, 000 for the lost suitcase. OR33M
Dear Sir or Madam, I was one of the passengers who took Trans World Airlines Flight 62 to New York on May 3rd. Unfortunately, my suitcase was lost. I am writing to place a complaint against my suitcase I sent that day. I was so dissatisfied with your company because my suitcase was not found even when I filled out a lost luggage form. My suitcase was my favorite one, it is light blue and the biggest size. I put a box of luxury presents for my mom in it. I came back from working abroad and had a lot of identical documents in my suitcase. I was waiting for it at the gate but I couldn’t see it. I filled out the lost luggage form then. The reference number on the form was NL283957. As a result, my company had to cancel the process of designing products, it was time consuming and then we had to pay compensation fees for the contract. I would appreciate it if you could directly explain and apologize for this matter. As I said above, the total value of my belongings inside my suitcase is worth a fortune, therefore I would be grateful if you offer $1, 000 compensation for my lost suitcase. I hope you will look into the matter and give me an immediate reply. Yours faithfully, Julie Phillip.
Dear Sir or Madam,

I was one of the passengers who took Trans World Airlines Flight 62 to New York on May 3rd. Unfortunately, my
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
suitcase
was
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
lost
. I am writing to place a complaint against my
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suitcase
I
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sent
that day.

I was
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so
dissatisfied with your
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company
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because
my
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suitcase
was not found even when I filled out a
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lost
luggage form.

My
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
suitcase
was my favorite one, it is light blue and the biggest size. I put a box of luxury presents for my mom in it. I came back from working abroad and had
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
a lot of
identical documents in my
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
suitcase
.
Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Consider rewording the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
I
was waiting for it at the gate
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but
I couldn’t
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see
it.
Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Consider rewording the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
I
filled out the
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
lost
luggage form then. The reference number on the form was NL283957.
As a result
, my
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
company
had to cancel the process of designing products, it was
This word is normally spelled with hyphen.
time consuming
and then we had to pay compensation fees for the contract.

I would appreciate it if you could
directly
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
explain
and apologize for this matter.

As I said above, the total value of my belongings inside my
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
suitcase
is worth a fortune,
therefore
I would be grateful if you offer $1, 000 compensation for my
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
lost
suitcase.

I hope you will look into the matter and give me an immediate reply.

Yours
faithfully
,

Julie Phillip.
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IELTS letter You took Trans World Airlines Flight 62 to New York on May 3, your suitcase was lost. You filled out a lost luggage form, but the suitcase was never found. The reference number on the form was NL283957. You want the company to pay $1, 000 for the lost suitcase.

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Coherence and Cohesion: 6.5
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