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Imagine that you work for Hudson Design. Write an email to Human Resources. Tell them what you: like about your job don't like about your job want to change in the company

Imagine that you work for Hudson Design. Write an email to Human Resources. Tell them what you: like about your job don't like about your job want to change in the company Wn1Nk
Greetings, Sir/Madam, I'm writing to share some facts about my profession with you. Despite the fact that I am now overworked, I am currently enjoying my work. As a website developer, I am capable of designing web pages, graphics, and photos in my own unique style. In addition, coaching clients on how to create their software is a fun aspect of my career. I enjoy working with my coworkers, but I have issues with my boss since he does not set clear goals for me and insists on receiving daily updates on my job. I believe that the organization should consider employment ideas in order to change the working methods and make everyone happier at work. I hope that my idea will be useful. Best regards, Ngan Nguyen.
Greetings, Sir/Madam,

I'm writing to share
some
facts about my profession with you.

Despite the fact that I am
now
overworked, I am
currently
enjoying my work. As a website developer, I am capable of designing web pages, graphics, and photos in my
own
unique style.
In addition
, coaching clients on how to create their software is a fun aspect of my career.

I enjoy working with my coworkers,
but
I have issues with my boss since he does not set
clear
goals for me and insists on receiving daily updates on my job.

I believe that the organization should consider employment
ideas
in order to
change
the working methods and
make
everyone happier at work.

I
hope that my
idea
will be useful.

Best regards,

Ngan
Nguyen.
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IELTS letter Imagine that you work for Hudson Design. Write an email to Human Resources. Tell them what you: like about your job don't like about your job want to change in the company

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128 words
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5.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 6.5
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Lexical Resource: 6.0
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Grammatical Range: 6.0
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Task Achievement: 5.5
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