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You would like to participate in a work-related seminar in another country. Write a letter to the person in charge of the seminar and ask for detailed information regarding the dates, program, accommodation and cost.

You would like to participate in a work-related seminar in another country. Write a letter to the person in charge of the seminar and ask for detailed information regarding the dates, program, accommodation and cost. yXPwP

Dear Sir or Madam, My name is Mustufa. I am writing this letter to know about the SEO seminar that will be held in Toronto, Canada. I am working in Crystal Cyber Company as an SEO Manager for the last 3 years. Firstly, as there was no information regarding the seminar in an advertisement. There are few things I would like to personally ask you and that is: When will the seminar begin and at what date will it end? Also, I would like to know what kind of SEO-related topic will be there? Will there be an Off-page or On-Page. And will there be any practical session or just a theoretical session? Secondly, will you provide accommodation or this is something that should be done by us? Last but not the least what will be the cost of a booking per seat? Looking forward to hearing from you soon. Yours Faithfully, Mustufa Khokhawala

Dear Sir or Madam,

My name is Possible spelling mistake found.Mustafa
Mustufa
. I am writing this letter to know about the SEO seminar that will be held
 in Toronto, Canada. I am working in Crystal Cyber This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :enterprisecorporation
Company
 as an SEO Manager for the last 3 years.

Firstly
, as there was no information regarding the seminar in an advertisement. There are few things I would like to personally
 ask you and that is
: When will the seminar This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :initiatecommence
begin
 and at what date will it This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :expiration
end
? Also
, I would like to know what kind of SEO-related topic will be there? Will there be an Off-page or On-Page. And will there be any practical session or This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:merely
just
 a theoretical session?

Secondly
, will you provide accommodation or this is something that should be done
 by us? Last This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:on the contrary
but
 not the least what will be the cost of a booking per seat?

Looking forward to hearing from you This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:in the near future
soon
.

Yours Faithfully
,

Possible spelling mistake found.Mustafa
Mustufa
Possible spelling mistake found.
Khokhawala

IELTS letter You would like to participate in a work-related seminar in another country. Write a letter to the person in charge of the seminar and ask for detailed information regarding the dates, program, accommodation and cost.

Letter

American English

7 paragraphs

153 words

6.0

Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 6.5

Structure your answers in logical paragraphs
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One main idea per paragraph
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Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
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Vary your linking phrases using synonyms

Lexical Resource: 5.5

Try to vary your vocabulary using accurate synonyms
Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes

Grammatical Range: 7.0

Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
Check your writing for errors

Task Achievement: 5.0

Answer all parts of the question
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Present relevant ideas
Fully explain these ideas
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Support ideas with relevant, specific examples

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