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You would like to participate in a work-related seminar in another country. Write a letter to the person in charge of the seminar and ask for detailed information regarding the dates, program, accommodation and cost.

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Dear Sir or Madam, My name is Mustufa. I am writing this letter to know about the SEO seminar that will be held in Toronto, Canada. I am working in Crystal Cyber Company as an SEO Manager for the last 3 years. Firstly, as there was no information regarding the seminar in an advertisement. There are few things I would like to personally ask you and that is: When will the seminar begin and at what date will it end? Also, I would like to know what kind of SEO-related topic will be there? Will there be an Off-page or On-Page. And will there be any practical session or just a theoretical session? Secondly, will you provide accommodation or this is something that should be done by us? Last but not the least what will be the cost of a booking per seat? Looking forward to hearing from you soon. Yours Faithfully, Mustufa Khokhawala
Dear Sir or Madam,

My name is
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Mustufa
. I am writing this letter to know about the SEO seminar that will
be held
in Toronto, Canada. I am working in Crystal Cyber
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Company
as an SEO Manager for the last 3 years.

Firstly
, as there was no information regarding the seminar in an advertisement. There are few things I would like to
personally
ask you and
that is
: When will the seminar
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
begin
and at what date will it
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
end
?
Also
, I would like to know what kind of SEO-related topic will be there? Will there be an Off-page or On-Page. And will there be any practical session or
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
just
a theoretical session?

Secondly
, will you provide accommodation or this is something that should
be done
by us? Last
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but
not the least what will be the cost of a booking per seat?

Looking forward to hearing from you
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
soon
.

Yours
Faithfully
,

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Mustufa
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Khokhawala
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IELTS letter You would like to participate in a work-related seminar in another country. Write a letter to the person in charge of the seminar and ask for detailed information regarding the dates, program, accommodation and cost.

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