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You live in a high rise building ,which has a communal laundry room sometimes people don't come in time to empty the machine and other residents have to wait for a washer or dryer .you think the building management should purchase 20 extra laundry basket and make them available for such times, so the machine can be freed up write to the property manager mr watson in your letter explain how long you have been a resident describe a problem.purpose your solution

You live in a high rise building, which has a communal laundry room sometimes people don't come in time to empty the machine and other residents have to wait for a washer or dryer. you think the building management should purchase 20 extra laundry basket and make them available for such times, so the machine can be freed up write to the property manager mr watson in your letter explain how long you have been a resident describe a problem. purpose your solution jRo6y
Dear john, I hope that you are well. Iam alash sanjel from kathmandu the capital city of nepal. I am studying bachelor in hotel management over the last 2years and I am a local resident of this city and I am staying here over the last 10 years Firstly, the main problem in your community people use washing machine for washing costume and playing game in their gadgets and did not care about the machine. Moreover, human being have to wait more for about an hour because of only one machine and more people to use. I would like to request you that if you could solve the problem and add more machine in society it will be very benifical for individuals and no one would to wait more time and can do other task. I look forward to your quick response. Your sincerely, Alash sanjel
Dear john, I hope that you are well.
Iam
alash
sanjel
from
kathmandu
the capital city of
nepal
. I am studying bachelor in hotel management over the last
2years and
I am a local resident of this
city and
I am staying here over the last 10 years
Firstly
, the main problem in your community
people
use
washing
machine
for washing costume and playing game in their gadgets and did not care about the
machine
.
Moreover
, human being
have to
wait more for about an hour
because
of
only
one
machine
and more
people
to
use
. I would like to request you that if you could solve the problem and
add
more
machine
in society it will be
very
benifical
for individuals and no one would to wait more time and can do other task. I look forward to your quick response.
Your
sincerely
,
Alash
sanjel
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IELTS letter You live in a high rise building, which has a communal laundry room sometimes people don't come in time to empty the machine and other residents have to wait for a washer or dryer. you think the building management should purchase 20 extra laundry basket and make them available for such times, so the machine can be freed up write to the property manager mr watson in your letter explain how long you have been a resident describe a problem. purpose your solution

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  American English
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145 words
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5.0
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Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
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Lexical Resource: 5.5
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Grammatical Range: 5.0
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Task Achievement: 5.0
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