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Dear Lisa, Hope you are doing well. I am writing this letter for your kind support in looking after my children during my official meet. All of sudden my boss appointed me to present our new project to the foreign delegates. As per the meeting schedule I was supposed to stay for longer hours which makes me tensed because then I have to left my kids at home all alone for a day. This meeting was really important for my career and just because of your help I was able to present well and save my job. In fact, my employer was so happy with my performance now he is willing to promote me in the coming quarter. Not only this, my children were so happy and had a great time at your place. They kept on talking about the fun they had. My daughter Saira really enjoyed the games played in the tent house. Also, the healthy snacks that you offered them are really appreciable. My son John was overwhelmed by the story that you recite during bedtime. Really, thanks a lot for taking good care of my kids. Please, let me know in any way I can help you. Also, I came to know that you are looking for a six seater car for your trip to Manali. I would be so glad if you take my Safari car for your expedition. Seriously, please accept my offer and let me do this for you in return. I would be so grateful to you and once again thanks a lot for your kind support and love. Hope you will accept my offer and let me know soon. Best Wishes Rita
Dear Lisa,

Hope you are doing well. I am writing this letter for your kind support in looking after my children during my official
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my boss appointed me to present our new project to the foreign delegates. As per the meeting schedule I
was supposed
to stay for longer hours which
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me tensed
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because
then I
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have to
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left
my kids at home all alone for a day. This meeting was
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really
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important
for my career and
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just
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because
of your
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help
I was able to present well and save my job. In fact, my employer was
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so
happy with my performance
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now
he is willing to promote me in the coming quarter.

Not
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only
this, my children were
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so
happy and had a great time at your place. They
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kept
on talking about the fun they had. My daughter
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Saira
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really
enjoyed the games played in the tent
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house
.
Also
, the healthy snacks that you offered them are
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really
appreciable. My son John
was overwhelmed
by the story that you recite during bedtime.
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Really
, thanks a lot for taking
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good
care of my kids.

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Please
,
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let
me know in any way I can
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help
you.
Also
, I came to know that you are looking for a six seater car for your trip to
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Manali
. I would be
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so
glad if you take my Safari car for your expedition.
Seriously
,
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please
accept my offer and
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let
me do this for you in return. I would be
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so
grateful to you and once again thanks a lot for your kind support and
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love
.

Hope you will accept my offer and
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let
me know
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soon
.

Best Wishes

Rita

IELTS letter write thanking letter to your friend

Letter
  American English
7 paragraphs
280 words
6.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 6.5
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    One main idea per paragraph
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    Include an introduction and conclusion
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    Support main points with an explanation and then an example
  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
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    Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 5.5
  • Try to vary your vocabulary using accurate synonyms
  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.5
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
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