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Write a letter to a cinema manager you have previously been to regarding a problem you had.

Write a letter to a cinema manager you have previously been to regarding a problem you had. xm2wg
Dear Sir, My name is Navneet Sandhu and I am a resident of Model Town area of Ludhiana city. I'm writing this letter to complain you regarding working of air-conditioner at the balcony seats. Last week, on Saturday I went to watch the Dark movie with my family at the PVR cinemas in the Ansal Plaza. The weather is too hot and we all require a comfortable sitting to enjoy movie but unfortunately the air-conditioner was not working in my area that is the top row of balcony area. I complained regarding this to the gate keepers of the cinema hall and requested them humbly to change seat of my friends & me but they knodded with "Yes" and did nothing and we were suffering hot due to this and not even able to enjoy the movie. I would request the cinema manager to throw light into this problem and assure the proper working of all air-conditioners to avoid this problem in future. Thank you inanticipation. Yours faithfully, Navneet
Dear Sir,

My name is
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Navneet
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Sandhu and
I am a resident of Model Town area of Ludhiana city. I'm writing this letter to complain you regarding working of air-conditioner at the balcony seats.

Last week, on Saturday I went to
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watch
the Dark movie with my family at the PVR cinemas in the
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Ansal
Plaza. The weather is too
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hot and
we all require a comfortable sitting to enjoy movie
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but
unfortunately the air-conditioner was not working in my area
that is
the top row of balcony area. I complained regarding this to the gate keepers of the cinema hall and requested them
humbly
to
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change
seat of my friends & me
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but
they
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knodded
with
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Yes
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"
and did
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nothing and
we were suffering hot due to this and not even able to enjoy the movie.

I would request the cinema manager to throw light into this problem and assure the proper working of all air-conditioners to avoid this problem
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in future
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Thank you
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inanticipation
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Yours
faithfully
,
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Navneet

IELTS letter Write a letter to a cinema manager you have previously been to regarding a problem you had.

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  American English
6 paragraphs
168 words
5.0
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Coherence and Cohesion: 6.5
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