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You should spend about 20 minutes on this task. You would like to participate in a work-related seminar in another country. Write a letter to the person in charge of the seminar and ask for detailed information regarding the dates, program, accommodation and cost. You do NOT need to write any address. You should write at least 150 words.

You would like to participate in a work-related seminar in another country. Write a letter to the person in charge of the seminar and ask for detailed information regarding the dates, program, accommodation and cost. You do NOT need to write any address. 9L5yr
Dear Sir, This is Anderson writing this letter to you from India. I am writing this since I require information about the seminar you have mentioned in your website related to artificial Intelligence. I am working as a full-time software engineer here. I came to know about this seminar in your website and also heard that it is open for all nationals. Since the seminar is related to Artificial Intelligence, I feel it would help me to get more expertise on such advanced topic. In the website, The date of the seminar was not mentioned. So, I need the precise date. I could see the seminar is designed in a such a way that it would take place for 3 days. So, Can you throw more light on the list of programs for all the days. Since I need to travel to your country, I need information on whether you provide any accomodation facilities for foreign nationals? One last information I require is whether you charge any money to attend this seminar? It is mentioned that the entry is free. Does it apply only for the locals or for other people as well? Please respond to my queries which would help me to plan my travel accordingly. Thank you Yours sincerely, Anderson.
Dear Sir,

This is Anderson writing this letter to you from India. I am writing this since I require information about the
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
seminar
you have mentioned in your website related to artificial Intelligence.

I am working as a full-time software engineer here.
Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Consider rewording the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
I
came to know about this
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
seminar
in your website and
also
heard that it is open for all nationals. Since the
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
seminar
is related
to Artificial Intelligence, I feel it would
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
help
me to
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
get
more expertise on such advanced topic.

The usual collocation for technology is "on," not "in." It is better to say this: "on the website".
In the website
, The date of the
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
seminar
was not mentioned.
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
So
, I need the precise date. I could
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
see
the
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
seminar
is designed
in a such a way that it would take place for 3 days.
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
So
, Can you throw more light on the list of programs for all the days.

Since I need to travel to your country, I need information on whether you provide any
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accomodation
facilities for foreign nationals? One last information I require is whether you charge any money to attend this
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
seminar
? It
is mentioned
that the entry is free. Does it apply
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
only
for the locals or for other
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
people
as well
?

This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
Please
respond to my queries which would
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
help
me to plan my travel
accordingly
.

Thank you

Yours
sincerely
,

Anderson.
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IELTS letter You would like to participate in a work-related seminar in another country. Write a letter to the person in charge of the seminar and ask for detailed information regarding the dates, program, accommodation and cost. You do NOT need to write any address.

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