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You recently organised an all-day meeting for your company, which took place in a local hotel. In their feedback, participants at the meeting said that they liked the hotel, but they were unhapy about the food that was served for lunch. Write a letter to the manager of the hotel. In your letter: 1- say what the participants liked about the hotel 2. explain whay they were unhappy about the food 3. suggest what the manager should o to improve the food in future

You recently organised an all-day meeting for your company, which took place in a local hotel. In their feedback, participants at the meeting said that they liked the hotel, but they were unhapy about the food that was served for lunch. Write a letter to the manager of the hotel. In your letter: 1- say what the participants liked about the hotel 2. explain whay they were unhappy about the food 3. suggest what the manager should o to improve the food in future 2b5WJ
Dear Sir or Madam, I am writing to let you know that recently I organized a work meeting in your facility which the participants were satisfied by the service you provided. However, there were some compliments about food you served for lunch. Let me explain the situation in more detail. Generally, the people who took part in the meeting were happy about behavior of the hotel staff. They were well-mannered very kind and friendly and everyone were comfortable to ask a question or made a request. there were some compliments about food, though. Our meeting was a quite big and we have some foreign participants as well as some vegetarian ones. Unfortunately, the menu was offering limited options. As a result, we managed to provide food from else where to fulfill taste of all our guests. Would you kindly make a reconsideration about food menu you offer in order to meet everyone’s taste? It is good to provide a comprehensive menu which includes wide range of local and international foods and also having offers for vegetarians or people who are in diet. Yours faithfully, Reza
Dear Sir or Madam,

I am writing to
let
you know that recently I organized a work meeting in your facility which the participants
were satisfied
by the service you provided.
However
, there were
some
compliments about
food
you served for lunch.

Let
me
explain
the situation in more detail.
Generally
, the
people
who
took part
in the meeting were happy about behavior of the hotel staff. They were well-mannered
very
kind and friendly and everyone were comfortable to ask a question or made a request.
there
were
some
compliments about
food
, though. Our meeting was a quite
big and
we have
some
foreign participants
as well
as
some
vegetarian ones. Unfortunately, the menu was offering limited options.
As a result
, we managed to provide
food
from else where to fulfill taste of all our guests.

Would you kindly
make
a reconsideration about
food
menu you offer in order to
meet
everyone’s taste? It is
good
to provide a comprehensive menu which includes wide range of local and international
foods
and
also
having offers for vegetarians or
people
who are in diet.

Yours
faithfully
,

Reza
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IELTS letter You recently organised an all-day meeting for your company, which took place in a local hotel. In their feedback, participants at the meeting said that they liked the hotel, but they were unhapy about the food that was served for lunch. Write a letter to the manager of the hotel. In your letter: 1- say what the participants liked about the hotel 2. explain whay they were unhappy about the food 3. suggest what the manager should o to improve the food in future

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6.0
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Coherence and Cohesion: 6.5
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Task Achievement: 5.5
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