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You have a full-time job and you are also doing a part-time evening course. You now find that you cannot continue the course. Write a letter to your teachers. In your letter describe the situation explain why you cannot continue at this time say what action you would like to take

You have a full-time job and you are also doing a part-time evening course. You now find that you cannot continue the course. Write a letter to your teachers. In your letter describe the situation explain why you cannot continue at this time say what action you would like to take E3lGL
Dear Mr. Smith, I would like to inform you that I will not be able to continue with the course. As you know that I have been working full time with a private firm. From the last few days, I am not able to get proper sleep and hence my output at work is getting affected. I wanted to inform you that I won't be able to continue the course. I have given this a lot of thought and I have arrived at this decision after a lot of speculation. One fine day my boss saw me sleeping at my desk. It was a very embarrassing situation. However, I understand the importance of this course in my life. I love the science class and my future depends on it. Hence, I request you to provide me notes daily so that I can read and learn the same during my holidays. I can collect them from the institute right after the class. Yours sincerely
Dear Mr. Smith,

I would like to inform you that I will not be able to continue with the course.
As
you know that I have been working full time with a private firm. From the last few days, I am not able to
get
proper sleep and
hence
my output at work is getting
affected
. I wanted to inform you that I won't be able to continue the course. I have
given
this
a lot of
thought
and I have arrived at this decision after
a lot of
speculation. One fine day my boss
saw
me sleeping at my desk. It was a
very
embarrassing situation.
However
, I understand the importance of this course in my life. I
love
the science
class
and my future depends on it.
Hence
, I request you to provide me notes daily
so
that I can read and learn the same during my holidays. I can collect them from the institute right after the
class
.

Yours
sincerely
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IELTS letter You have a full-time job and you are also doing a part-time evening course. You now find that you cannot continue the course. Write a letter to your teachers. In your letter describe the situation explain why you cannot continue at this time say what action you would like to take

Letter
  American English
3 paragraphs
162 words
6.5
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 6.0
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  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
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    Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 6.5
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  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.0
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 6.5
  • Answer all parts of the question
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    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
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    Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
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