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You would like to participate in a work related seminar in another country.write a letter to a person incharge and ask him about the details.

You would like to participate in a work related seminar in another country. write a letter to a person incharge and ask him about the details. pXdYy
Dear Sir I am writing this letter as a response to your article which published in Hindustan Times that your company, which is one of the eminent company in Australia is going to organized a seminar on diversity of accountancy for mid firm. I wish to join this seminar, together with this, I required some information about it. As, I am travelling to Australia from London. I want to confirm that when this seminar will be conducted by your officers, where will be its location along with this pleass assure me any accommodations available at the reasonable prices. Therefore, I will arrange all the things accordingly. I do not want to forget any crucial document here. You are requested to clear all my queries as I am bewildered between things; What to carry or not. I will be very enthusiastically come to participate in this meeting. I know you are the merely person whom I can talk. Hope to see you soon. Your's faithfully
Dear Sir

I am writing this letter as a response to your article which published in Hindustan Times that your
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
company
, which is one of the eminent
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
company
in Australia is going to
'Going to' requires the base form: "organize"
organized
a seminar on diversity of accountancy for mid firm.

I wish to
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
join
this seminar, together with this, I required
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
some
information about it.
“As” at the beginning of a sentence usually requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
As
, I am travelling to Australia from London. I want to confirm that when this seminar will
be conducted
by your officers, where will be its location along with this
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pleass
assure me any accommodations available at the reasonable prices.
Therefore
, I will arrange all the things
accordingly
. I do not want to forget any crucial document here.

You
are requested
to
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
clear
all my queries as I
am bewildered
between things; What to carry or not. I will be
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
very
enthusiastically
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
come
to participate in this meeting. I know you are the
merely
person whom I can talk. Hope to
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
see
you
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
soon
.

Did you mean "Your" or "Yours"?
Your's
faithfully
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IELTS letter You would like to participate in a work related seminar in another country. write a letter to a person incharge and ask him about the details.

Letter
  American English
4 paragraphs
163 words
6.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 6.0
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Lexical Resource: 6.0
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  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.5
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  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 5.0
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    Present relevant ideas
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