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You were absent from an important event held by the company you work for write a letter to your manager

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Dear Mr. Perera, I'm writing this letter to formally apologize for my absence from the annual audit meeting of the company held on yesterday. First of all, I again aplogize for not able to coming this important meeting. I well known the importance of that. Unfortunately, I could not attend this meeting due to my mother's sick. She was hospitalized because Covid-19 symptoms can be seen from her. I really upset and scared for it. After hospitalized. I can know she was felt in dengu fever. I was not ablte to come but my department all the documents, presentaion diliver true my secretary. I sincerely apologize for absence and I think you trust my situation. I hope my apology will be accepted.
Dear Mr.
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Perera
, I'm writing this letter to
formally
apologize for my absence from the annual audit meeting of the
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company
held on yesterday.

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First of all
, I again
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aplogize
for not able to coming this
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important
meeting. I well known the importance of that.

Unfortunately, I could not attend this meeting due to my mother's sick. She
was hospitalized
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because
Covid-19 symptoms can be
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
seen
from her. I
really
upset and scared for it. After hospitalized. I can know she
was felt
in
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dengu
fever. I was not
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ablte
to
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come
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but
my department all the documents,
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presentaion
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diliver
true my secretary.

Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Consider rewording the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
I
sincerely
apologize for absence and I
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think
you trust my situation.
Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Consider rewording the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
I
hope my apology will be
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accepted
.
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IELTS letter You were absent from an important event held by the company you work for write a letter to your manager

Letter
  American English
4 paragraphs
122 words
This writing has been penalized,
text can't be
less than 250 words in Task 2
and less than 150 words in Task 1
5.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
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    Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 5.5
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  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.5
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 5.0
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    Present relevant ideas
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    Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
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