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Job application for an international position

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Dear Sir/Madam, I am John Hardy writing this letter to express my interest in the job position: Senior Advisor with reference ID: PR 123 for Shell Corporation located in Chicago, United States. This new role of Senior Advisor looks promising to me, as it gives a variety of opportunities to interact with the customers and understand their requirements. Moreover, as most of our customers are based out of United States. This location and time zone are convenient. I am employed with Shell Corporation in Bangalore center for the past 10 years. Currently, I am handling the role of Product Specialist. I am into understanding and analyzing the product in detail. This knowledge would be crucial in any decision-making. Leveraging my current expertise on the intrinsic capabilities of our solution would help to cater to any customer requirements. Considering, my previous experience in customer projects. I believe I would be able to bring significant value addition to this new role. Hope you would consider my application favorably for this recruitment. Yours faithfully, Thomas Hardy.

Dear Sir/Madam,

I am John Hardy writing this letter to express my interest in the job position: Senior Advisor with reference ID: PR 123 for Shell Corporation located in Chicago, United States. This new role of Senior Advisor looks promising to me, as it gives a variety of opportunities to interact with the You use this word too often, consider replacing it withclientconsumerpatronpurchaser
customers
 and understand their requirements. Moreover
, as most of our You use this word too often, consider replacing it withclientconsumerpatronpurchaser
customers
are based
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of United States
. This location and time zone are convenient.

I am employed
 with Shell Corporation in Bangalore center for the past 10 years. Currently
, I am handling the role of Product Specialist. I am into understanding and analyzing the product in detail. This knowledge would be crucial in any decision-making.

Leveraging my This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :contemporarymodern
current
 expertise on the intrinsic capabilities of our solution would This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :assistassistance
help
 to cater to any You use this word too often, consider replacing it withclientconsumerpatronpurchaser
customer
 requirements. Considering, my previous experience in You use this word too often, consider replacing it withclientconsumerpatronpurchaser
customer
 projects. I believe I would be able to bring significant value addition to this new role.

Hope you would consider my application favorably
 for this recruitment.

Yours faithfully
,

Thomas Hardy. 

IELTS letter Job application for an international position

Letter

American English

7 paragraphs

173 words

6.0

Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 6.5

Structure your answers in logical paragraphs
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One main idea per paragraph
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Include an introduction and conclusion
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Support main points with an explanation and then an example
Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
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Vary your linking phrases using synonyms

Lexical Resource: 6.5

Try to vary your vocabulary using accurate synonyms
Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes

Grammatical Range: 6.5

Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
Check your writing for errors

Task Achievement: 6.5

Answer all parts of the question
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Present relevant ideas
Fully explain these ideas
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Support ideas with relevant, specific examples

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