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LETTER TO NURSE FOR DIET ADVISES

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Dear jenny, This letter will inform you regarding Mr Derek who underwent coronary artery bypass grafts who needs dietary advice for further management. Initially, he presented to us on 20th December 2017 with complaints of pain in the chest which started about five months ago and worsened on excretion, tightness in the chest, heaviness in both arms and shortness of breath. Subsequently, he has been diagnosed with obstructive coronary artery disease hence the surgery. His postoperative period was uneventful but had difficulty in defecating which resolved after a day. He has been commenced on physiotherapy and advised to consume a low-fat diet. His medical history reveals that he has constipation occasionally for which he is taking isobgol. Socially, He has the habit of smoking five to six cigarettes and consumes 600ml of beer per day. His dietary habit consists of consuming sausages, fried chips, pizzas, and pasta. His BMI is 29 which is remarkably high. As per the discharge plan, it would be greatly appreciated if you could help him to reduce his weight and educate him regarding a low-fat diet along with simple recipes that can be prepared at home. Kindly encourage him to decrease alcohol consumption and quit smoking. Please note that he is on aspirin and vicodine. Kindly send the detailed guideline to his home address. Thank you in anticipation for agreeing to help Ms juicy. Please contact me if you have any queries regarding Ms juicy. Thank you
Dear jenny,

This letter will inform you regarding Mr Derek who underwent coronary artery bypass grafts who
needs
dietary advice for
further
management.

Initially
, he presented to us on 20th December 2017 with complaints of pain in the chest which
started
about five months ago and worsened on excretion, tightness in the chest, heaviness in both arms and shortness of breath.
Subsequently
, he has
been diagnosed
with obstructive coronary artery disease
hence
the surgery. His postoperative period was uneventful
but
had difficulty in defecating which resolved after a day. He has
been commenced
on physiotherapy and advised to consume a low-
fat
diet.

His medical history reveals that he has constipation
occasionally
for which he is taking
isobgol
.

Socially
, He has the habit of smoking five to six cigarettes and consumes 600ml of beer per day.

His dietary habit consists of consuming sausages, fried chips, pizzas, and pasta. His BMI is 29 which is
remarkably
high.

As per the discharge plan, it would be
greatly
appreciated if you could
help
him to
reduce
his weight and educate him regarding a low-
fat
diet along with simple recipes that can
be prepared
at home. Kindly encourage him to decrease alcohol consumption and quit smoking.
Please
note that he is on aspirin and
vicodine
.

Kindly
send
the detailed guideline to his home address. Thank you in anticipation for agreeing to
help
Ms juicy.
Please
contact me if you have any queries regarding Ms juicy.

Thank you
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IELTS letter LETTER TO NURSE FOR DIET ADVISES

Letter
  American English
9 paragraphs
241 words
6.0
Overall Band Score
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