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letter to the magazine incorrect info 1. correct info 2. not expected 3. what to do

letter to the magazine incorrect info 1. correct info 2. not expected 3. what to do DVB5m
Dear Sir or Madam, I am writing this letter to express my discontent regarding the article published in your magazine. The information mentioned about the oldest university is incorrect. It includes an article in the page 14 relating to the best and the conventional universities that provide students with top education and research technologies. It is concluded that the first traditional english-speaking university is the Cambridge, however, as a matter of fact, Oxford was established in 1096 whereas, Cambridge in 1209. I never anticipated that a top magazine like yours, can publish information without through checking. As highly influential among the companies and individuals it is the vital responsibility to make sure that the content is absolutely correct. I would strongly suggest you to publish a new version with the right information, in addition to that, an apology for incorrect and not proof reading the matter initially. I also strictly urge you to thoroughly ensure with the factual information and hope this is an accident never repeated. I look forward from hearing from you. Yours faithfully,
Dear Sir or Madam,

I am writing this letter to express my discontent regarding the article published in your magazine. The
information
mentioned about the
oldest university is incorrect.

It includes an article in the page 14 relating to the best and the conventional universities that provide students with top education and research technologies. It
is concluded
that the
first
traditional
english-speaking
university is the Cambridge,
however
, as a matter of fact, Oxford
was established
in 1096 whereas, Cambridge in 1209.

I never anticipated that a top magazine like yours, can publish
information
without through checking. As
highly
influential among the
companies
and individuals it is the vital responsibility to
make
sure that the content is
absolutely
correct.

I would
strongly
suggest you to publish a new version with the right
information
,
in addition
to that, an apology for incorrect and not
proof reading
the matter
initially
. I
also
strictly
urge you to
thoroughly
ensure with the factual
information
and hope this is an accident never repeated.

I
look forward from hearing from you.

Yours
faithfully
,
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IELTS letter letter to the magazine incorrect info 1. correct info 2. not expected 3. what to do

Letter
  American English
7 paragraphs
176 words
6.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 7.0
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Task Achievement: 5.0
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