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Refund of amount for malfunctioning fan

Refund of amount for malfunctioning fan APo11
Dear sir /madam, Iam letting you to know that purchased product from your show room has issues, rather significant malfunction to be honest. On December 6th, 2020, while driving by your shop at park central, division west I noticed a lot of fans were displayed for sale in upfront on pedestrian platform. After entering, Sales representative who received with warm greetings guided me further inside on knowing my requirement. Thorough search of all fans pointed me to a single product designated A52, one of the Delta variations. Going through intense assessment of former mentioned product, I opted for inclusion as it met all the criteria, and esthetic match for my living room is felt there upon. I completed the purchase following rigorous bargaining of concerned item with promised refund in the future incorporated along with it. Post packaging, I kept it in the back of my car. Owing to the occasion of my brother's marriage reception in Ontario I delayed fan fixation by 1 week. Iam displeased with the fan even after confirmation of power in electric board. Alongside this letter, photos of fan post fixation were sent to you. I would prefer refund of the amount paid or else get it replaced with a new fan. I sincerely hope you could respond at the earliest, awarding a solution that meet both the ends Thanking you in advance, Yours sincerely, Dhareskov
Dear sir /madam,

Iam
letting you to know that
purchased
product from your
show
room has issues,
rather
significant malfunction to be honest.

On December 6th, 2020, while driving by your shop at park central, division west I noticed
a lot of
fans
were displayed
for sale in upfront on pedestrian platform. After entering, Sales representative who received with warm greetings guided me
further
inside on knowing my requirement. Thorough search of all fans pointed me to a single product designated A52, one of the Delta variations. Going through intense assessment of former mentioned product, I opted for inclusion as it met all the criteria, and
esthetic
match for my living room
is felt
there upon.

I completed the
purchase
following rigorous bargaining of concerned item with promised refund in the future incorporated along with it. Post packaging, I
kept
it in the back of my car.

Owing to the occasion of my brother's marriage reception in Ontario I delayed fan fixation by 1 week.
Iam
displeased with the fan even after confirmation of power in electric board. Alongside this letter, photos of fan post fixation were
sent
to you.

I would prefer refund of the amount paid or else
get
it replaced with a new fan.

I
sincerely
hope you could respond at the earliest, awarding a solution that
meet
both the ends

Thanking you in advance,

Yours
sincerely
,

Dhareskov
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IELTS letter Refund of amount for malfunctioning fan

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