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you would like to participate in a work- related seminar in another country. Write a letter to the person in charge of the seminar and ask the detail information regarding the dates, program, accommodation and cost.

you would like to participate in a work- related seminar in another country. Write a letter to the person in charge of the seminar and ask the detail information regarding the dates, program, accommodation and cost. mdPn
Dear Sir, I am Ron Ln Oliver, an ICU Nurse at the Retardant city sacred heart hospital, located in the province of Passing in the Philippines. I am writing to ask for some specific information regarding the seminar schedule, program details, accommodation arrangement and the cost. To begin with, with regards to dates and time, what will be the seminar schedule and what time would it begin and end each day? Apart from this, please notify me of the topics and speakers of the program. I am wondering if there is any special consideration for the registered nurses who will be attending the seminar? And finally, I would also like to know about the accommodation and the cost. Would the accommodation be arranged by you or should an individual be responsible for that? What would be the approximate cost to attend and successfully finish the seminar? I am very much interested in attending the seminar and your reply would help me to plan for it in advance. I am looking forward to hearing from you. Yours faithfully, Ron Ln Oliver
Dear Sir,

I am Ron Ln Oliver, an ICU Nurse at the Retardant city sacred heart hospital, located in the province of Passing in the Philippines. I am writing to
ask for
some
specific information regarding the
seminar
schedule, program
details
, accommodation arrangement and the cost.

To
begin
with,
with regards to
dates and time, what will be the
seminar
schedule and what time would it
begin
and
end
each day? Apart from this,
please
notify me of the topics and speakers of the program. I am wondering if there is any special consideration for the registered nurses who will be attending the
seminar
? And
finally
, I would
also
like to know about the accommodation and the cost. Would the accommodation
be arranged
by you or should an individual be responsible for that? What would be the approximate cost to attend and
successfully
finish the seminar?

I am
very
much interested in attending the
seminar
and your reply would
help
me to plan for it in advance.

I am looking forward to hearing from you.

Yours
faithfully
,

Ron Ln Oliver
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IELTS letter you would like to participate in a work- related seminar in another country. Write a letter to the person in charge of the seminar and ask the detail information regarding the dates, program, accommodation and cost.

Letter
  American English
7 paragraphs
179 words
6.5
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 6.5
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Lexical Resource: 6.0
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Grammatical Range: 6.5
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Task Achievement: 6.5
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