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Write a letter to your friend. You have borrowed something from your friend and it got damaged . In your letter , • apologize for damaging the product • explain what happened • say how you are going to fix the issue

Write a letter to your friend. You have borrowed something from your friend and it got damaged. In your letter, • apologize for damaging the product • explain what happened • say how you are going to fix the issue WAdq
Dear Enola, Hope you’re doing well! I have written to apologize you that it has taken me so long to write to you but at last I put my pen down to explain why I haven’t returned that scarf which I have borrowed from you. To be honest, I’ve been feeling so guilty that I delayed writing to you. I have to own up that I damaged that scarf accidently. I’m so sorry. I know how important that scarf is to you as it was passed down from your late grandmother. What happened is that I had been clicking certain pictures with my sister and when I went to balcony, the scarf got stuck on a sharp edge where it got torn up. Most of the torn up part is on the side line of the scarf. I have sent the scarf away to get it repaired. I didn’t realize that it was even possible after hearing that weird sound. Anyway, it should be as good as new when I get back next weekend then I’ll send it on to you. Again, I’m so sorry for the delay in telling you. Hope to see you soon and looking forward for your forgiveness. Regards, Cheryl.
Dear
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Enola
,

Hope you’re doing well! I have written to apologize you that it has taken me
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so
long to write to you
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but
at last I put my pen down to
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explain
why I haven’t returned that
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scarf
which I have borrowed from you.

To be honest, I’ve been feeling
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so
guilty that I delayed writing to you. I
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have to
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own
up that I damaged that
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scarf
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accidently
. I’m
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so
sorry.
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I
know how
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important
that
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scarf
is to you as it
was passed
down from your late grandmother.

What happened is that I had been clicking certain pictures with my sister and when I went to balcony, the
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
scarf
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
got
stuck on a sharp edge where it
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got
torn up. Most of the torn up part is on the side line of the scarf.

I have
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sent
the
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
scarf
away to
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get
it repaired. I didn’t realize that it was even possible after hearing that weird sound. Anyway, it should be as
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good
as new when I
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get
back
next
weekend then I’ll
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send
it on to you.

Again, I’m
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so
sorry for the delay in telling you. Hope to
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see
you
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soon
and looking forward for your forgiveness.

Regards,

Cheryl.
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IELTS letter Write a letter to your friend. You have borrowed something from your friend and it got damaged. In your letter, • apologize for damaging the product • explain what happened • say how you are going to fix the issue

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  American English
8 paragraphs
204 words
6.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 6.5
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Lexical Resource: 5.5
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Grammatical Range: 6.5
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Task Achievement: 5.0
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