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Your office building doesn't have parking available. Write a letter to the manager. In your letter: • Explain the problem • Suggest a solution • Say why parking will benefit all employees

Your office building doesn't have parking available. Write a letter to the manager. In your letter: • Explain the problem • Suggest a solution • Say why parking will benefit all employees xeYQ
Dear Sir, I am Simran and I am writing to report the lack of parking facility in our office premises. I have been working here as a consular executive for almost 4 years. This company is indeed an employee friendly organization but parking is still a major concern for everyone. Majority of employees prefer private vehicles to commute to work. But, due to no parking space, employees have to use public transport. This is awfully unsafe for the female workers, especially at night. Moreover, searching for a parking space nearby is a time consuming task for both business clients and employees. As our business is expanding, the number of visitor is also increasing. Hence, the problem of parking is becoming worse day by day Having no parking zone is a serious problem and this could not be neglected. Therefore, I would like to suggest some remedial measures to resolve this issue. Firstly, we could be provided with parking facility on the ground floor of the building by shifting the marketing department to the fifth floor. Alternatively, we can request the municipal corporation to allocate some reserved space for the parking in the nearby area. I look forward to hearing from you. Yours Sincerely
Dear Sir,

I am
Use a comma before 'and' if it connects two independent clauses (unless they are closely connected and short).
Simran and
I am writing to report the lack of
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
parking
facility in our office premises.

I have been working here as a consular executive for almost 4 years. This
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
company
is
indeed
an
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
employee
friendly organization
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
but
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
parking
is
still
a major concern for everyone. Majority of
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
employees
prefer private vehicles to commute to work.
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
But
, due to no
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
parking
space,
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
employees
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
have to
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
use
public transport. This is awfully unsafe for the female workers,
especially
at night.

Moreover
, searching for a
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
parking
space nearby is a
This word is normally spelled with hyphen.
time consuming
task for both business clients and
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
employees
. As our business is expanding, the number of visitor is
also
increasing.
Hence
, the problem of
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
parking
is becoming worse day by day

Having no
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
parking
zone is a serious problem and this could not
be neglected
.
Therefore
, I would like to suggest
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
some
remedial measures to resolve this issue.
Firstly
, we could
be provided
with
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
parking
facility on the
This word is British English. Did you mean "first floor"?
ground floor
of the building by shifting the marketing department to the fifth floor.
Alternatively
, we can request the municipal corporation to allocate
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
some
reserved space for the
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
parking
in the nearby area.

I look forward to hearing from you.

Yours
Sincerely
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IELTS letter Your office building doesn't have parking available. Write a letter to the manager. In your letter: • Explain the problem • Suggest a solution • Say why parking will benefit all employees

Letter
  American English
6 paragraphs
202 words
6.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 6.5
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Lexical Resource: 5.5
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Grammatical Range: 6.5
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Task Achievement: 5.0
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