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You recently stayed at your friend’s place, to look after the house while he/she is away. You accidentally damaged something in his/her house. Write a letter to your friend. In your letter, you should:  Describe what the accident was  Explain when it happened  Suggest how the damage can be fixed

You recently stayed at your friend’s place, to look after the house while he/she is away. You accidentally damaged something in his/her house. Write a letter to your friend. In your letter, you should:  Describe what the accident was  Explain when it happened  Suggest how the damage can be fixed 7BVb
Dear Aman, I hope you would be in pink health and high spirits. Firstly, I would like to thank you for allowing me to take care of your home when I was looking for a rental one. Secondly, yesterday i break your flask placed besides television. I am really sorry for this accident. Actually everything went suddenly. As I was watching movie on television, on the next movement the door bell rang. In hurry, I picked up the keys which were near the flask. Unintentionally, I hit that; it fell down and broke. I know probably after reading this you would be concerned about it due to the fact it was costly. However, I would like to assure you that please do not take tension since I found same flask on Amazon, and I placed order too. It will receive by next tuesday. Once again I want to apologise to bother you on holiday. Stay stress free and enjoy your quality time. Lovingly, Vikas
Dear
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Aman
,

I hope you would be in pink health and high spirits.
Firstly
, I would like to thank you for allowing me to take care of your home when I was looking for a rental one.
Secondly
, yesterday
Is this the personal pronoun "I"? It is spelled uppercase.
i
break your flask placed
besides
television. I am
really
sorry for this accident.

Actually everything went
suddenly
. As I was watching movie on television, on the
next
movement the
This word is normally spelled as one.
door bell
rang. In hurry, I picked up the keys which were near the flask.
Unintentionally
, I hit that; it fell down and broke.

I know
probably
after reading this you would
be concerned
about it due to the fact it was costly.
However
, I would like to assure you that
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
please
do not take tension since I found same flask on Amazon, and I placed order too. It will receive by
next
Possible spelling mistake found.
tuesday
.

“Once” at the beginning of a sentence usually requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
Once
again I want to
Possible spelling mistake. 'apologise' is British English.
apologise
to bother you on holiday. Stay
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
stress
free and enjoy your quality time.

Lovingly
,

Vikas
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IELTS letter You recently stayed at your friend’s place, to look after the house while he/she is away. You accidentally damaged something in his/her house. Write a letter to your friend. In your letter, you should:  Describe what the accident was  Explain when it happened  Suggest how the damage can be fixed

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  American English
7 paragraphs
163 words
6.0
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Coherence and Cohesion: 6.5
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Lexical Resource: 6.0
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Grammatical Range: 7.0
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