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You have made a reservation in a hotel for a business trip for you and your colleagues. However, you need to make some changes to your booking. Write a letter to the hotel manager. In your letter • give details of your current booking • explain what changes you need to make and why • ask the manager to make some special arrangements for your business meetings

You have made a reservation in a hotel for a business trip for you and your colleagues. However, you need to make some changes to your booking. Write a letter to the hotel manager. In your letter • give details of your current booking • explain what changes you need to make and why • ask the manager to make some special arrangements for your business meetings 0D7G
Dear Sir, I am writing this letter to you in regards of making some changes in my booking. My name is Akash and I booked two suites in your hotel for five days in June. I am writing this letter to request you to change our booking dates for the period as we were supposed to stay in the hotel from 5th June till 9th June, 2020. We had also booked two cars for local sight-seeing. However, due to urgent work commitments at my office, we would not been able to check in before 16th June, 2020. Hence, I am requesting you to kindly change our arrival date to the 15th of June and checkout date to the 19th of June at 12 pm. The taxi booking should also be changed according to our plans. I regret the inconvenience caused to you due to the above changes. I look forward to a positive reply from your end. Yours sincerely, Akash.
Dear Sir,

I am writing this letter to you
Use "in regard to", "with regard to", or more simply "regarding".
in regards of
making
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some
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changes
in my booking. My name is Akash and I booked two suites in your hotel for five days in June.

I am writing this letter to request you to
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
change
our booking dates for the period as we
were supposed
to stay in the hotel from 5th June till 9th
When specifying a month and year, the comma is unnecessary: "June 2020".
June, 2020
. We had
also
booked two cars for local sight-seeing.
However
, due to urgent work commitments at my office, we would not been able to
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
check
in
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before
16th
When specifying a month and year, the comma is unnecessary: "June 2020".
June, 2020
.
Hence
, I am requesting you to kindly
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
change
our arrival date to the 15th of June and checkout date to the 19th of June at 12 pm. The taxi booking should
also
be
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
changed
according to our plans.

I regret the inconvenience caused to you due to the above
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
changes
.

I look forward to a
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
positive
reply from your
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
end
.

Yours
sincerely
,

Akash.

IELTS letter You have made a reservation in a hotel for a business trip for you and your colleagues. However, you need to make some changes to your booking. Write a letter to the hotel manager. In your letter • give details of your current booking • explain what changes you need to make and why • ask the manager to make some special arrangements for your business meetings

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  American English
7 paragraphs
160 words
6.0
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